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Saturday, October 31, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry



October Sun

Standing under a winters sun
it moves; rising toward the west
In a rapid run like
thousand times before.

Parabolic arc through steel blue
sheeted sky; it’s warmth it gives away to distance, to Atmosphere and age.

Like a thousand times before it’s movement leaves gray deserted streets and an empty silent desert, and creatures sleeping.

The summer! lost to fleeting time pushing seasons past yesterday to embrace; the cold darkness at horizons blue black line.
 
As the graying light at noon descend we huddled in a silent room awaiting the announcement of night; mourning loss of summer sun replaced by arrival of Halloween moon

Slate gray universe scratched by Payne gray hew, the October sun finished  Chases its’ moon into the sky to search Sun’s embers,
flinging them as stars into the sky We sit in a warm embrace before this October parade, with our fires waning in the hearth and embers dieing we send them to join the stars.
                                                                                                                                     Jerry d.
jana
Jana Hello

 
what can i say?  masterful as usual.

 
Posted by jana on Saturday, October 31, 2009 - 7:24 PM
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jerry
Jerry desbrow

 
Thank you jana, It always pleases me when you find my work acceptable. My puter is sick and I dont know what to doo...
 
Posted by jerry on Saturday, October 31, 2009 - 8:09 PM
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I'm Changing my Name to %#$@!
Rose Aiello Morales

 
This is wonderful.  Wish October heralded the cold here.  It's 90 degrees out. Yuck.
 
Posted by I'm Changing my Name to %#$@! on Saturday, October 31, 2009 - 7:44 PM
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Jerry desbrow

 
Thank you Rose, seasons are emotional waves not easly forgoten and confronting me in present.
 
Posted by jerry on Saturday, October 31, 2009 - 8:27 PM
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Mary Ann Blinkhorn

 
I really enjoyed this, Jerry.
 
Posted by Mary Ann Blinkhorn on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 3:45 AM
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Jerry desbrow

 
Thanks Mary, it is the fall of the 67th year of October and a personal message to all younger.

 
Posted by jerry on Sunday, November 01, 2009 - 3:58 AM
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Jerry desbrow


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