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Mindless Rantings of an Insane Louisiana Boy Exiled in the Northeast “I hold a beast, an angel and a madman in me, and my enquiry is as to their working, and my problem is their subjugation and victory, downthrow and upheaval, and my effort is their self-expression.”-Dylan Thomas

September 25, 2009 - Friday 

Category: Writing and Poetry
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Stark light dies gently into night

Web in the Pinhole Sky

All magic tricks traded in a smile


This mind slips for miles and miles

Down haunted highways and back again

Body shiver, blended realities

But you know I love you



Sting of the awakened dream

This kismet, a touch

Fires sparked in the breath of Heavens' fall to earth

Morning



These are things we try not to understand

In chemistry of flesh, this alchemy of you

Loneliness should never be held in honor

Wishes made on fake eye lashes



Intruding breeze graze naked shadows

Still returns, fears are often more comfort

Civility wanders, tied in doubt against the shore
  Ignited, spark against the dead dry wood called home



This cannon ball untouched

This gun unsheathed

This uncompromisable trigger

Unspoken promise sets in motion



There is but long life before us



Written across lines on occupied paper in desolate white

Theological games dissolve understanding

This, the translators spirit to scribble each design

Divinity defined in who suffers



Big moon standing still

Through the window against the cast black reflection she dances

Records slight skip, the slow song plays long

Tall candles burn past the fingers into wax, into hemp, into flesh

Blood moves through miles, drunk screams

Human incantations



Scribbled against the fallen tree

Sky blue stolen to cover naked feet

Still I get dazed when I hear rain



The Days spent to chase nights

Pleas of words blind thoughts

Ignore your insanity somewhere in the time between



Deception is a world unchanged

Mistaken conscious, well of unsure waters

And the philosopher holds his high regard

And no better is their answer



"Sewn across each thread found

Simple design

Flesh in pattern

Bound tight, this sorted nature"



And years will end till counted in regret

The ghost passes through in the scent of her refuge

Cherry wine to stained lips, still I ask for another sip



Red autumn devil steals attention from it's black ocean embrace

As thieves stand amongst us

And you, a music note still to be heard

My promise to listen

Taking tears away from each face

Spelling mysteries on the dark part of the wall

Still fears no evil, summers endure



Doors drawn on the home a rich man has stolen

Entitled to the worming trail below him

Stepping over his broken train track of forsaken tomorrows



Still I carve each effigy from soft stone and sacred wood

Spinning each grain of sand to glass

This my promised design

I pray only clarity when I seek them

My eyes and their shame



Deciphered numbers, the game of the holy

This pneumatic ideal of each cherished god

Carefully arranged in heaven's ashtray

Humanity often unhinged

Trust placed amongst the duality of every imagined poem


We are all prophets some days

Kellet

 
This whole thing is stunning, but this

Still I carve each effigy from soft stone and sacred wood
Spinning each grain of sand to glass
This my promised design
I pray only clarity when I seek them
My eyes and their shame
Is gold.

 
Posted by Kellet on September 25, 2009 - Friday - 1:47 AM
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BlackWidow

 
Happy you finally got your drink :)  This is a magicians weave of words indeed! will read again I'm sure~
 
Posted by BlackWidow on September 25, 2009 - Friday - 1:49 AM
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Lance Strate

 
ha!  your last line is the perfect complement to the last line of the poem I posted a few days ago!  Enjoyed this expression of seeker spirituality, SG

 
Posted by Lance Strate on September 25, 2009 - Friday - 2:54 PM
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gina*m

 
Undone...that is what one is at these words. They are, beautiful, spiritual, emotional, temporal, sensual...Stunning work, truly. All amazing, s4,5, 7, 8,9, 14,16, perfection. I still long for the sound of rain...Mad love and respect for this one
~justme
 
Posted by gina*m on September 25, 2009 - Friday - 4:07 PM
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SOME RANDOM CHICK

 
As always....beautiful. XXOO

 
Posted by SOME RANDOM CHICK on September 25, 2009 - Friday - 7:04 PM
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Seb

 
Is it just me or is there an uncommon optimism to this piece?

 
Posted by Seb on September 25, 2009 - Friday - 11:13 PM
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Glo

 
i enjoy the way you write in colours.
i enjoy the way you write. period.
:)

 
Posted by Glo on September 26, 2009 - Saturday - 5:54 AM
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IrishT

 
this reads to me as searching for or arrival at, promise beyond our governing laws and religions and expectations. a primal promise, based on the true and the pure and depth of feeling. no piece of paper, no inscription, no teachings make our loves more or less true. beautiful my friend. xox
 
Posted by IrishT on September 26, 2009 - Saturday - 3:27 PM
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Mystery

 
i do so hate when i am late to one of your genius spills.  i get dazed when i hear rain, and sometimes when i read YOU.  love how you get the neglected parts of my brain whirling.  like i've said before and will say again, the words of the prophets are written in Solomon Grundy's blogs.

xo
 
Posted by Mystery on September 26, 2009 - Saturday - 11:49 PM
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The Official Naked Nurse
N N

 
Have I told you lately that I enjoy you?

 
Posted by The Official Naked Nurse on September 27, 2009 - Sunday - 1:09 AM
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Flirt Like A Butterfly, Sting Like A Bee

 
Your stuff is great!

 
Posted by Flirt Like A Butterfly, Sting Like A Bee on September 27, 2009 - Sunday - 8:57 AM
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I Am The Anti-Tom!!
Charlie Boon

 
Oh Yes.

 
Posted by I Am The Anti-Tom!! on September 27, 2009 - Sunday - 7:28 PM
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Angela

 
I have truly missed your writing.. this is beautiful Sol.. 
 
Posted by Angela on September 29, 2009 - Tuesday - 3:18 AM
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qUiXoTiCaT / Freedom CZAR!!!

 
Wow... where the hell have you been man?!? Beautiful write! Great love from the source of all love.

"A ship is safe in the harbor... but that isn't what ships are made for is it?" Peace and Love to you R. A
 
Posted by qUiXoTiCaT / Freedom CZAR!!! on September 30, 2009 - Wednesday - 3:55 AM
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Award Winning Poet/Photographer/Author & Veteran

 
Awesome write!
 
Posted by Award Winning Poet/Photographer/Author & Veteran on October 2, 2009 - Friday - 12:26 AM
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Broken Verse

 
...I honestly can say I am speechless~   This I had to read in parts and submerge myself to each one to discover the pulp of the feeling which this was written... Beyond words...

ps.  You mention rain in many of your poems.. I noticed.
 
Posted by Broken Verse on October 3, 2009 - Saturday - 7:41 PM
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Anissa

 
Fires that awaken truth...laid bare upon the stone of eternity
 
Posted by Anissa on October 11, 2009 - Sunday - 1:14 AM
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Penelope
Penny Voss

 
I love how much more I feel when reading your blogs.  I wish someday to express myself so impressively.  I find that I am capable of feelings (lol) but expressing those feelings in words I find daunting.  Thanks for sharing
 
Posted by Penelope on November 5, 2009 - Thursday - 1:59 AM
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tina

 
I really liked this! Thx,~t

 
Posted by tina on November 11, 2009 - Wednesday - 1:37 PM
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