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Thursday, June 01, 2006 

do you know what is

here

are my thoughts

coming through

clear

i hope you can

feel it in your heart

cause i'm not sure

how to start

ya see

i havn't quite found

the right kind of sound

that'll bring everyone around

to see

i can't stand these thoughts

not being expressed

i'm tired

of goin' around

angry

and feelin'

so stressed

it's no good

bein' this way

every night, every day

if you have some wisdom

enpart some

i'm so tired of

being

Major Tom

do you know

 what

is here

 

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amy

 
i wish i had some wisdom! you seem so sad, too. i think we're all looking for the right sound, but maybe it's not the right sound that's needed, but the right listeners.
 
Posted by amy on Tuesday, June 06, 2006 - 3:05 PM
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Rob D.
Rob Dalenberg

 
When are you going to give this piece a tittle? Have you thought about "What is Here"? Just a thought. I like the flow, leaves a lot of room for the readers imagination. Great stuff!
 
Posted by Rob D. on Saturday, October 07, 2006 - 7:04 AM
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