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animal tracks ...from tomorrow’s girl

May 7, 2009 - Thursday 


her body was in the same room as his
the cracklespeak of the tee vee
became the veil between them

i am here, i am just
watching the news

there are many kinds of violence

perhaps because the cracks in her
veneer were showing perhaps her ability
to manipulate surface appearances
to get a particular result
out of him had begun to fail
perhaps he bored her
perhaps she wished he was
somebody else

she got what she thought she wanted

she let the anchor tell the room 
stories nobody wanted to hear

she cut the line
let her ship drift away
while she was sitting 
right next to him

i am here, i am just
watching the news

Mark-just typing

 
very strong piece both in it's longing and ambivilance. Very visual stuff here.

loved this... "she let the anchor tell the room
stories nobody wanted to hear."

excellent work~ cheers
 
Posted by Mark-just typing on May 8, 2009 - Friday - 12:32 AM
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