what is the story about... that would help in deciding what style you should write in. if you want my help i write short stories all the time kam kam. ttyl. hope i can help.
 

a post-apotolyptic world, evil sand dwelling boars, make shift-weapons, and deadly ass vampires.

I'm totally writing down everything i remember and gonna write me a killer short story.

get this... I killed a cpl vampires with a handheld shotgun... loaded with butter knives.

thats right.

butter knives.

i've got more, i just, i rough draft stuff in pencil then go to the computer. but the town is very western, yet makeshift. made with broke machinery and metal. the sand outside of town are the evil boars. like sandworms from bettlejuice? i guess. but the town is surround by a huge wall of ice. so the counsil forces all the people not pulling there weight around the town into the alley's and underground part of the city. where they eventually become vampires somehow. i still havn't worked out how yet. but i got some krazy ideas.
eventually they vampires rebel. the usall stuff.
 

sometimes it is easier to come up with a title after the story is written! dont forget to totally make me hot though! i want to be one kick ass bitch!!! lol love ya
 

of course you'll be totally hot. red hair, big boobs. sounds like my dream woman right there! ;)
 

lol thats not to far off just leave the baby belly off !!
 

red hair... big boobs... no baby belly. ok i got it. anything else?