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[18 Oct 2007 | Thursday] 6:25

Current mood:Refrain from a deeper meaning. There is none.
Knives off Knives off
Medication Sedation
Don't come back
Don't come back
Medication Sedation
Knives off Knives off
Knives off the plaid crew
Knives off for the plaid crew
And when they walk into the bar
And when they order their shots
Medication. Sedaton.  Knives off
On the plaid crew for when they leave
And when they leave
They exit the bar
They get into their car.
Keep your knives off
They don't come back
They don't make any more stops
The plaid crew
They will not come back
to any familiar spots.

Copyright ©2007 C. Douglas
Currently listening:
Rockabye Baby! Lullaby Renditions of Radiohead
By Rockabye Baby!
Release date: 29 August, 2006
(teh 703z)
Chris Price

 
Hate?
 
Posted by (teh 703z) on [18 Oct 2007 | Thursday] - 6:48
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Xysea

 
personally, i prefer anger and madness - but then i have my perverse side, lol.

very stark, but hard-hitting. it captures the reader's attention.
 
Posted by Xysea on [18 Oct 2007 | Thursday] - 12:42
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purpledogstar
Purple Dogstar

 
Interesting use of repetition and rhyme.
 
Posted by purpledogstar on [18 Oct 2007 | Thursday] - 20:11
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(teh 703z)

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