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Thursday, October 29, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Just to let you all know I am still alive and still here.  Computer got hacked into severely.  Internet cuts out constantly and loses all my work.

I'm working on fixes and may just redo the whole network.

Took some time to work on my book.

Pride in Poetry Prize extended, will inform soon.

Will respond to mail soon.

So sorry for the hiatus.  Been going crazy.

DE






Will It Be Your Hand?

By the monkey cage
at the Portland Zoo
we can dance.

In the morning dew
we can plan it all out
so let us go.

For a ride we can take
the train--
over the river and through the woods.

We'll take the camera
and then
let us pack a lunch and go.

To the zoo it is, then,
to find our way
if we take the chance.

Maybe we can connect again
and share the things
we so enjoy.

My time with you
was better once
together.

We could explore the zoo
in search
of our lost symphony.

When the soft music plays
and the wind calls my name
I'll be by the monkey cage.

And when I reach out
will it be your hand I'm taking
or the monkey's?


©2009 by DE Navarro and NavWorks Press. All rights reserved.






Send me some form poetry. Any kind of form you want.

Tuesday, September 29, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Swine Flu

Yep, I got it, two of my three kids and my wife, we've all been out for over a week, it's been a miserable mess around here, we are all over the worst of it, I've never had a fever this long, my kids and family were listless and out of it, and my oldest daughter has been here the whole time and never got touched. Go figure.

Just want you to know, I'll be back.  Need to get a little stronger and more with it.

Poetry Challenge:  Open forum, post what you like.

See you soon!
Wednesday, September 23, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
I decided to switch chapter 4 and 5. Here you go, next installment.

Chapter 4—The Cave

Elya went to bed and Temmolin slipped out the back. Garrold couldn’t believe that Temmolin had actually hid and spied on him. Good thing Garrold smelled him out when he did, and better that he controlled his rage when he realized. Another confrontation was out of the question. Garrold would have argued his way right into trouble and perhaps immediate arrest. Temmolin had the authority to determine proper cause and detain anyone.

Instead of getting angry, Garrold tried to lead Temmolin on with his last statement, that he intended to have a part in the wonderful change of the Bower. Did Temmolin buy it? The old coot was too sharp for that. But perhaps it was enough to placate him, enough to give Garrold time to depart.

He had to warn the others. It wasn’t safe for him to stay. He could feel it in his bones. He hated to leave, but he had to so he set about gathering his supplies. Each moment of the now spent night gathered more urgency. Should he leave before dawn?

The scenes of his mind kept playing out in the worst possible scenario. He could see Temmolin orchestrating his arrest and coming for him. It was so real, or was it just his imagination? He was overreacting. He should just wait until morning. After all, the Providers gave him an opportunity to decide, hadn’t they? They noted his ability. They wanted him on their side.

“Stop it,” he said to himself hoping to silence the thoughts. He rubbed his temples and took a deep breath. He would wait until morning. Get some rest, eat a good breakfast, tell Elya, and then leave. But what if he was wrong? There he went again, the stage of his mind set. Temmolin gathered the Bower Guard for his arrest. On what grounds? It didn’t matter. It was too real. He couldn’t chance it. He had to go as soon as possible. It was settled.

His heart was heavy. To leave his love without an explanation, not even so much as a goodbye, tore him up inside. He would leave a note. That’s the best he could do. He certainly couldn’t take her with him. It would be far too dangerous. As much as he didn’t like Temmolin, he knew she would be safe back here with her father. Whatever happened, Temmolin would protect her, probably overprotect. She was a strong jenni herself, she would understand. She knew his love and loved him in kind.

Garrold pulled a small chest from its hiding place in the floor. He kept his most valued treasures secured away there. Even Elya did not know, he didn’t think. Maybe she had spied him retrieving it on some occasion. She was sharp, like her father. You couldn’t get much by her. But she had never let on in any case, letting him enjoy his privacy. She was good that way.

In the chest were some maps and scrolls of the Writings sealed in airtight bone cases, as well some jewels, trinkets and artifacts. He threw the maps and scrolls in his pack. In a small, intricately carved mahogany box, were two silver rings, a gold ring, an emerald, and one gold chain, and a peculiar silver pendant he received from a minstrahl some years back. It bore an image of the sun brightly shining out of the center of a triangle. He stuffed the mahogany box, with all its contents, into his pack.

Then he came to the norshwood box he made himself, finely crafted to hold a unique treasure, a crystal-clear orb he obtained four years earlier. After a long and severe rainfall exposed it, Reston’s sons fetched Garrold to come and see a shiny ball they found stuck in the dirt. They knew never to touch an orb. Only magnhemists touched orbs.

He followed them a few hundred yards into the woods outside the Bower complex. The top of the orb was peeking back out into the world from which it had come. How long had it been buried? He scooped it up in a handful of soil, careful not to touch it, and deposited it into a bag. He thought better than to show Magna Ulberrin and the Bower. They would have taken it and locked it away.  So instead, he studied it himself.

It was smaller than a typical orb and crystal-clear, like none other he had ever seen or heard. His research turned up nothing. No histories or writings bore reference to a clear orb. Every orb was colored according to the Bower it belonged to, the Bower it was linked to.

He discovered that the clear orb was lifeless. It had no power. There was no connection with anything. An empty shell. Perhaps it was never finished or it was made in error. Maybe it was even a child’s play toy of some past time. It might also be some incredible artifact from the distant past, from the days of the first Ancients in the land. He decided to keep it and thought that maybe some dawn he would learn something more of it, unlock its secrets. He set the box and orb aside. He wouldn’t need it for now. It could stay hidden in the floor.

He continued to rummage through the chest, turning his attention to a quickwood statuette no larger than his index finger, a Provider standing with outstretched arms engaged in some grave task. It was similar to the tokens used by the magnhems to work the amalgama grid. His friend, Glick Spittingrock, an old urlani he met on a visit to the city of Ynara, gave it to him. Glick said his father passed it on to him and called it, “The Summoner.”

The clear orb caught Garrold’s attention again. It was remarkably brilliant, as always, like a gem sparkling in sunlight. He scooped it up into his palm.

Light exploded in his mind. The deep, melodic rumble of Olrhom permeated his consciousness. He was plunged into it. Get out now, the Imitor yelled in his mind, they come for you. Make haste. There is no time. Stop for nothing. Go to the Archgate of the Otherworlder. There you will meet Kurdevon. Move now. Go!

He leapt into action. He pocketed the orb and slung his pack over his shoulder before the thrum of Olrhom had vanished. In one continuous movement he tucked the chest under his arm, dropped the floor lid back into place, and sprang to the front window. He nudged the shutter open just enough to see. The lights were coming. He bolted to his cloak and blade, which hung on a peg by the hearth, and out the back he fled.

The shadows were thick and dark. He dashed into them to hide from his would-be captors. Temmolin, for sure, but who else? It was risky to stay, but he had to see. He had to know who came for him. Was it the mysterious warners of impending doom who claimed to prepare the paths of the Ancients? He spied two unusually tall persons in Bower robes leading the pack with Temmolin. Within the cowls of their hoods he noted the distinct blue shimmer. He was right. Providers, after all. A band of the Bower Guard followed. The earlier imaginations, the scenes on the stage of his mind, had not been figments. 

His stomach clenched like a fist ready to drive itself up through his throat. The Bower wasn’t right. Everything was going crazy. People were all acting different. He needed answers. The crystal-clear orb puzzled him. It had been lifeless, a nothing-orb, before. Yet this time it ignited in fury, thrusting him into Olrhom, connecting him with the Imitor.  Not as usual, where he first sensed Olrhom’s deep thrum washing into his awareness. It was immediate. No effort, no flow, just there.

The sudden drama into which he’d been immersed continued to unfold before his eyes. His house was now lit up by torches, lanterns, and lightstones wielded by an agitated mob that materialized out of the cool night air. As they pounded on his front door, he slipped away, between the granary and the brewery, toward one of the service gates in the perimeter wall. It was being watched.

Garrold’s blood rushed through his heart and face. Temmolin probably had every gate in the complex under watch. He was trapped. There was no other way out save the underground tunnels, which he had no knowledge nor experience in using. He wouldn’t get anywhere but lost in them. What about the ramparts? Could he get into the fortified wall and up to the ramparts? Not a chance. Guards were assigned to control access to the wall and he wasn’t ready to start killing any innocent guards for doing what they were told.

He pictured himself on the other side of the wall. How could he get there? There were no breaches to exploit, nothing was under construction. He couldn’t remember any trees or towers along the wall by which he might climb to the top. The walls themselves were way too high to scale, unless he had some climbing equipment.

Climbing equipment. Reston was a climber. Reston’s gear was stored in his shed, a lean-to built against his cottage, a mere quarter mile away. He could sneak there, take what he needed, and scale the wall. That would work.

The tumult was spreading. They now knew that he wasn’t at home. Word was being passed and the alert was going out. He had no time to dawdle and sneak to Reston’s place. He’d have to run for it. He stuck close to buildings, hedges, and trees, sprinting from shadow to shadow.

The moons still shed contrasting umbras. Tor was already easing down toward the horizon and Sar was high in the sky. The first light of dawn was not far off. He ran faster, waited less time between each building, each hedge, each tree. Several times he thought he detected motion, a guard looking for him. It was just the tricks of the shadows and wind. Reston’s place was in sight. He made his last dash across someone’s garden, between a hedgerow, and up to the shed.

The shed was secured with a thick rope. Not thick enough to resist Garrold’s blade. The door creaked slightly as it opened. He stepped in and shut it. He pulled a lightstone from his pocket to illuminate the disheveled interior of the small shed. A grappling hook and rope hung within reach. He also stuffed some spikes, a climbing hammer, and an extra length of rope into his pack. There was a net hanging from a peg, like the kind used to trap small animals. He wrapped his secret chest in it and tied it to his pack.  

“Sorry old friend,” he said into the air, thinking of Reston who slept safely inside his home. “I’ll return these or replace them later.”

He emerged from the shed. The perimeter wall was no less than an eighth of a mile from the back of Reston’s cottage. He moved fast but kept low, scurrying behind some scrub until he came to the last tree between him and the wall. It was a big oak, yet it paled in comparison to the formidable stone wall some thirty yards away. He studied the wall and found where he would throw the grappling hook. With hook and rope ready in hand, he crept forward through the waist-high grass.

Two guards on horse approached from his left. They must have been sitting, watching in the shadows. Had they seen him or were they just moving? He dropped into the concealing grass. The grappling hook dug into his side. He winced but dared not reposition with the horses bearing down on him. He tightened his neck, clenched his teeth, made fists, and held his breath.

Hooves thumped all around, one grazed his leg, but that was it. They trotted on oblivious to him. He waited until the heavy beat of their gallop trailed off before rising to his knees. “That was too damn close,” he said after them in reproof. The noises of pursuit grew louder as searchers began to close in on the area. They might be going to Reston’s. There was no time to waste.

His first throw fell short and the hook clanked against the wall. Someone had to hear that. He threw again. The hook sailed over the wall and landed with an even louder clank. He tugged and it grabbed. With his pack and chest slung over his shoulder, he climbed.

The wall offered no handholds. He used the knots in the rope to ascend. Arm over arm he pulled, pushing up off the wall with his feet, careful not to tip. It was taxing but his strength prevailed. Blades practice kept him fit. He made the top of the wall and dropped onto the parapet. Looking back he saw that some pursuers were now closing on the wall.

Up came the rope, hand over hand. Two guards bounded toward him along the parapet, off to his right, less than a quarter mile away. Not a move could be wasted. Resisting the urge to rush, he methodically dislodged the hook, found a spot on the opposite wall, and wedged it in. Over the top the rope went, and he on it. Down he slid, the land pulling him in. He let go and dropped the last six feet, hitting the ground running. Through the tall grasses he fled, toward the edge of the same woods that gave him the clear orb several years before.

He ventured a glance back over his shoulder. The guards stood with bows drawn, pointing, but he was already too far and too obscured in the murky shadows of the pre-dawn morning. With the light of the sun beginning to break, the Bower looked eerily trapped within the walls against the gray sky.

I will be back. I will find out what is going on and I will free you.

Mounted search parties and Bower Guard patrols would be out to find him soon, if they weren’t already. He had to keep moving, and fast. Where could he go to gather his thoughts and form a plan? There were some villages nearby in several different directions, but he had to avoid roads. What about the high country? He could make his way toward home in the hills of Evinshear and hide there. But that was opposite the direction to go to reach the Archgate of the Otherworlder.

Would Kurdevon really be there to meet him. What did Kurdevon know of Vikzyrn, False Admonishers, and he who comes with the hordes? Should he journey down to at Bar Ynara and meet with Haknem first? He trusted Haknem implicitly. He knew he would be absolutely safe there. Haknem would know how to contact Kurdevon. But if Kurdevon truly was heading to the Archgate of the Otherworlder to meet him, then perhaps Haknem did not know how to contact him.

Garrold was tired, confused, and a little hungry. He had no food with him and he needed rest. He could live off the land, but he wouldn’t have time to forage until Temmolin, the Providers, and the Bower Guard were off his back. He certainly couldn’t rest until he was hidden away. Then he could figure this whole mess out.

There was a cave about six miles deep into the Green Wood at the foothills of the Culloden Range. He would hide there. He knew the way well. Reston’s older son, Omarr, discovered the cave on a climbing trip. Reston’s younger son, Bander, had discovered the clear orb a year before that. Reston’s youngest child, Luria, had not joined the legacy of her brothers’ explorations and discoveries, but she was still too young to climb and roam about.

Reston Qintar was the brother Garrold never had. He and Elya were now such a part of the Qintar family that the children called them Aunt and Uncle. Elya got along amiably with Reston’s wife, Fen. But it was the long-time bond between Garrold and Reston that was at the core of their kinship.

Garrold met Reston shortly after coming to the Bower as a young Learner of Magnhemistry. Reston’s father was a Bower kojen, working as a craftier of building interiors. Reston took an early interest in cooking and pursued that as a trade, but he followed his father’s footsteps as a climber and ranger.

Reston was expert in all outdoor skills. Several years back he took Garrold on a special expedition with him and his two sons to teach him how to identify food and forage off the land, how to climb, how to survive in any wilderness, and how to erase all clues of a camp, leaving nature undisturbed. They returned many times over the years for more training and adventure, but it was that first time when Omarr discovered the cave.

The cave was their secret. No one would know of it, save he and the Qintar family. They had used it as a base camp on many expeditions into the Cullodens. Each time, Reston proudly announced that the cave had been undisturbed since their last visit. No one else had discovered it and ruined their hideout.

The entrance was well concealed in a tangle of young trees and thick underbrush. It was a small rock outcropping about eight feet by seven feet across. It protruded no more than four feet from the forest floor. In the face of it, behind some shrubbery, there appeared to be nothing more than a crack in the rock. But when you crouched and shuffled into it, you could see a hole that dropped away to the right. By sitting and thrusting your feet into the hole, you could scoot forward and slide down into it, dropping about six feet into a good sized cavern.

Inside the cavern, other chutes and tunnels led farther down, but spelunking was not on Reston’s list of favored activities. He liked open and upward, not confined and downward, and so they never explored the cave much. They found one large tunnel that led downward into a gaping chamber twenty feet wide by thirty feet long and about twelve feet high. That was good enough for Reston. Omarr and Bander poked around a bit more in the other tunnels and holes, but reported that they led to nothing significant, just a few smaller chambers.

Garrold continued to run for the first two miles to put distance between him and the Bower. After that, he ran in short spurts, walking in between, making some decoy paths by doubling back and moving in different directions, and even jumping from tree to tree a few times where they were close enough. In the last mile, he stopped to eat some zingolberries, “one of nature’s whole foods,” Reston called them. You could live for months on them alone. He filled a sock full of the berries and moved on. He walked in a stream for a half mile to further throw his scent off. The final leg of the hike was uneventful.

The rising sun warmed the sky, though it was still a mild dawn. The cave was exactly as he expected it. After scouting the area and insuring it was clear of intruders and varmint, he crouched in the opening and slipped in. His lightstone ignited at his touch and washed the cave in a steady glow. He made his way to the large inner chamber, pulled his cloak around him, laid on his pack, and before he knew it, went to sleep.

He awoke several hours later quite refreshed and ventured out to check for signs of pursuers. He found none, gathered some firewood, and returned to the cavern. He built a small fire. A crack in the ceiling made a perfect vent. He and Reston never figured out where the smoke went, but it didn’t rise anywhere near the cave. Garrold gulped a handful of refreshing zingolberries. He would need water later, but the juice of the berries was enough for now.

He carefully pulled his maps out of their cases and traced the route to Maghren Butte, site of the Archgate of the Otherworlder. He was headed in the right direction. Greymark Pass, the main route over the Culloden Range, was seven miles north. It led thirty miles down to Tower’s Shadow, a mining town mostly populated by Loth-Vales, but governed by Evinfolk. He could be there in less than two dawns. From there he could get passage on a broon down the Orren and Daebor rivers to the great river port Clefdon, a massive walled and fortified city of the Vales. That would take another two dawns. He could then find a local guide that would direct him the final eighty miles through the treacherous Har Forest in Dyram to Maghren Butte, another two to three dawns. He could be there in six dawns if all went well. If they were already looking for him at Greymark Pass, however, he’d have to slip around another way. That would add another dawn.

Garrold stoked the fire with a few more thick sticks. His thoughts drifted first to his wife. He ached as he imagined the shock she went through in the early hours as the posse pounded on his door, then to find him gone, to find him a fugitive. He never did write that note. He hoped she would understand. Maybe he could contact her through Reston. By now Reston would know his gear was missing and know he took it. He hoped Reston would have Fen contact Elya. That would give her a clue that he was all right. 

He thought of his folks back in Evinglan, opposite the direction he now traveled. He hadn’t seen his mother, father, and sister in over three years. What would they think when they heard? Garrold’s father, Dinnis, was a smart jen, maybe even sharper than Temmolin. Dinnis would be okay. He’d never prejudge his son. He would know there was good reason for his flight from the Bower. He might even take to the road to try to come and help. He wasn’t called Dinnis the Helper for nothing. He was well known and respected in all the trade circles for hundreds, maybe even thousands of miles.

Garrold inventoried his pack and chest. He had enough berries for a few days, he knew where to get water, and his clothes were sufficient for most weather except for extreme cold. He had basic climbing supplies, a net to catch small game, a tinder box for fires, a hunting knife, and a few other odds and ends. He also had his trusty blade, a light-weight, two-edged broad sword, and of course, his Bower orb. He could thrive.

He removed the scrolls, mahogany box, and other items from the pack and returned them to his chest. The clear orb was still in his pocket. He took a felt cloth from his pack and carefully reached into the depths of his robe to remove the orb. He didn’t want to touch it again just yet. He wasn’t so sure he fully trusted it. He had tested it every way he knew and it was powerless, yet on its own it came to life.

Maybe the Imitor had some answers. Perhaps it had evaded the Ravers and was ready to talk to him. Everything had moved so fast that he could hardly remember what the Imitor said that first time on the way home from the Bower. The encounter with the Providers stunned him so much that the message from the Imitor rapidly faded from memory. Then his argument with Elya followed that.

He tried to recall the message of the Imitor. Fragments came. Formed to help you stand against the Dark Heart. Evil power rises in Vikzyrn with Rezkelion, who comes with the hordes. Draws strength from the Tree to give the dark Heart of Morbidity. He must be defeated.

Rezkelion. That was the name. A defector. He who comes with the hordes. It didn’t sound good. And what of the Dark Heart? Why was Garrold to stand against it? Did the Imitor expect him to fight Rezkelion? Surely that’s not what it meant. Garrold shook his head. How had he missed it? The message seemed plain now. The Imitor was made to help him defeat Rezkelion. Help him defeat the enemy of the land and his peoples. Why him?

Dismay welled up in his throat. He shuddered. This couldn’t be happening. Enough was enough. He needed to talk to the Imitor, get straight answers. The Imitor would know. He slipped the felt cloth out from under the clear orb and dropped it into his palm.

Light exploded in his mind. The deep, melodic thrum of Olrhom rushed through him. All else was quiet. No Imitor.

Where are you, he searched. Imitor, come to me. There was nothing. He’d have a look around instead. There was always the danger of getting lost in Olrhom, of not finding your way back into your own mind. The longer you were away, the less likely you were to find your way back. Magnhemists had physically died while their minds roamed in Olrhom. The fragments of their memories were said to have formed into Spectres, creatures of Olrhom similar to the Imitors. Just as with the Imitor, most considered the Spectres to be myth. But Garrold now knew that Imitors were not.

He reached out to view the room where he was. You always started in Olrhom right where you were physically. Normally, you would stay put and use Olrhom to see and work with the power of the Tree. Olrhom revealed things that were impossible to see in the physical world, such as where the power of the Tree was concentrated, where a hidden orb might be, or other Tree goods. To work the power of the Tree, you had to direct the forces present to produce desired effects, if you knew how.

But Olrhom also offered seemingly infinite routes of possibility from there. You could detach your thoughts from your physical self and go roam anywhere in Olrhom if you could figure out how to get there, if you could figure out how to use the portals offered, how to manipulate the Olrhom environment. It wasn’t easy. Ultimately, you would have to find your way back to your physical location so you could get back to yourself. The way scenes and portals changed in Olrhom, hardly anyone ever experimented with looking around, too many never made it back.

Garrold tried it a few times. Not very far. Just enough to experience what it was like. Magna Ulberrin forbad the practice except under authorized conditions, which meant he would choose who could go and when if there was reason or need.

Through the lens of Olrhom, the cave looked the same, only much brighter. Garrold was riveted on one particular bright spot on the floor near the wall, an indication of a concentration of the power, or something made from the Tree. He’d have a closer look after scanning the rest of the chamber.

He rotated right, slowly, methodically, taking everything in. An entire section of the cave wall shone in magnificent brilliance through the lens of Olrhom. A rush of excitement washed over him as he pulled back at the power to dim the view so he could see the details. Bringing it into focus, he saw the shimmering image of a stone archway. He staggered a few steps back as he took it in. He couldn’t believe it. It just couldn’t be. Where there was only rough stone before, the smoothly worked structure of the archgate stood clear.

It was like any stone archway, such as you would find in a citadel, or even in the Bower. But within the arch, rather than an opening through which you might walk, the archgate was solid stone. Engraved in the keystone atop the arch was a symbol of a brilliant sun shining out of the center of a triangle, the same as his peculiar pendant.

A number of loose streams of Garrold’s learning came flowing together into a river of understanding. Bits and pieces he had read in the Writings, in the unofficial histories, and in the books of other magnhemists before him. The Prizmhatic Orbs and Equilaterals, items associated with Archgate Veor, existed in the time of the Ancients when the pathways were open. But they were all thought to have been removed when the Ancients left. Both items were needed to activate Archgate Veor, as was shown on the pendant. But how did the pendant figure into all this?

Garrold received the pendant on his last visit to Evinglan. A minstrahl performed at the Three Peaks, the largest pub in town. His father, Dinnis, loved the minstrahls. In honor of Garrold’s visit, he took the whole family out for the show. After the show the minstrahl introduced himself to Dinnis and asked about his son.

“This is Magnhem Garrold of the Green Bower.”

“Very nice to meet you,” the minstrahl bowed, “so you’re Magnhem Garrold.”

“You know of me?” Garrold asked.

“Indeed, I do, I even sing a song of thee, would you like to hear it?”

Garrold laughed. Surely this was part of the amusement of a minstrahl. To think that there was a song of him. “Sure, go ahead.”

“It’s called The Spor of Many Colors.”

Garrold’s eyes widened but the minstrahl broke into the song before he could interrupt.


There was a jen of Evinglan
A strong-willed jen was he
And all he ever thought of
Was to live magnhemistry.
To live magnhemistry.

The time of his own choosing came
He squeezed the spor with might,
But when he opened up his palm,
The spor was dark as night,
The spor was dark as night.

And in the air the silence hung
For never once this jen was stung
And this is how this song is sung
I sing it with a learned tongue.

He took the matter well in hand
And with his will he won
He scaled the wall erected there
The spor was like the sun,
It shone just like the sun.

Within it every color shone,
From
agwin to zateen,
The spor of many colors born
The freedom we have seen,
The land all healed and clean.

And in the air the silence hung
For never once this jen was stung
And this is how this song is sung
I sing it with a learned tongue.

Listen all to what I sing,
The minstrahl’s song is laid
For with the Otherworlder come,
The power is remade.
The power is remade.


The applause went up throughout the entire house. Garrold reddened. The minstrahl bowed and thanked him for being a good sport and for allowing him to sing the song. Then he pulled the pendant out from under his tunic and off of his own neck.

“This pendant is for you, Garrold. It is a token of my appreciation for your song. The pendant is the key to your future. I have carried it with me and waited to meet you these many years. I didn’t expect it would be right here in your home town.”

He placed the pendant in Garrold’s hand. Garrold accepted it of course. Everyone knew the tradition. You never refuse the gift of a minstrahl, just never. The gift of a minstrahl brings joy to a whole community. It is given as the reminder of the power of song to uplift and enlarge the heart, and as a token of future success.

The pendant ended up in Garrold’s mahogany box, and the riddle of the song was never really solved. The nameless minstrahl left town the next day and Garrold never saw him or heard of him again. The Owner of the Three Peaks said the jen simply called himself, The Minstrahl of Ghalensa.

No one else had ever heard of the song, The Spor of Many Colors. Many teased Garrold that he had made the whole thing up, that he’d had too much ale that night. But Dinnis remembered the song, as well as Garrold’s mother and sister, Taura and Drianna. They all remembered and remarked at what a wondrous song it was.

Garrold dismissed the whole incident as the amusement of a minstrahl. The minstrahl probably heard that a Magnhem from the Bower was in town and asked around to hear the story of his Occasion of Choosing. Then he wrote a quick song and saved it for the end of his show to awe his audience with his mysterious wisdom of local history. The pendant was the final touch, the master stroke, the gift from the minstrahl to bring joy to the community.

But with this new evidence of the Archgate Veor, it was obvious there was more to the pendant, the minstrahl, and the song now. He could ask around Clefdon. It was a huge city with a wide array of travelers. Somebody there would know of the song or the minstrahl if indeed he sang it elsewhere.

Garrold could hardly fathom the immensity of being in the presence of an archgate. He pulled himself out of his gawking fixation and finished the scan of the chamber. He returned to the bright spot on the floor. Upon closer examination he was sure it was something made from the Tree, buried about eighteen inches deep under the packed mud. After pinpointing the location, he pocketed the orb. Olrhom vanished and his vision and hearing returned to normal.

He dug with one of the climbing spikes. It was laborious, but in time he exposed a part of the object. With even a point exposed, he knew exactly what it was, an Equilateral. One of the items needed to activate the archgate. He was thrilled with the discovery. Was there also a Prizmhatic Orb somewhere nearby, perhaps in one of the other chambers of the cave? He’d have to go looking later.

He finished excavating it and cleaned it with a cloth dipped in cave water, then he polished it with his robe. There was nothing significant about its design. It was about seven inches tall and an inch thick on all sides. On the interior plane of one side there was a slight depression where the Prizmhatic Orb was to be placed to activate the key to the Archgate of Veor.

There stood the archgate, hidden away behind the cave wall all these years. How many times had he slept next to it, along with Reston and his sons? It was remarkable. And now he had half the key to opening it. Yet, even if he had the Prizmhatic Orb, what reason would there be to open up the pathways? They had been dormant for so long. It would be dangerous to test them. Nevertheless, having the Equilateral thrilled him. An artifact from the time of the Ancients. What might he learn from it?

He set the Equilateral down against his pack and went outside to have a look around, to check for signs of pursuers. Satisfied no one had been in the area, he went to the spring nearby and drank to his full, also filling a waterskin. The hours were passing and he needed to get some rest before departing on his journey. He returned to the cave determined to have a quick look around inside using the crystal-clear orb before getting some sleep. Maybe he would find that Prizmhatic Orb.

He never got out of the main cavern. As soon as he palmed the orb, the Equilateral began to hum and glow an opalescent pink. Intrigued, he reached out and without thinking placed the orb in the depression. Brilliant rays of white light shot from the orb, out of the center of the triangle, and onto the cave wall that concealed the archgate. It turned clear and vanished away, leaving only the archgate beneath. The sound of rushing wind filled the chamber. The interior of the archgate began to move and swirl, like it was being mixed. It moved slowly at first, but then began to increase in speed as it became more and more malleable.

Garrold stood fast, numbed by the remarkable display of power before his eyes. The archgate was opening. Something that hadn’t happened in ages, and he was a part of it. The interior of the archgate lost substance and began to dissipate into a translucent ocher fog that wisped away until the gateway was open, but pitch-black. Light seemed to end at the entrance of the archgate. He thrust his lightstone closer, but it had no effect. He couldn’t see into it.

Incredible implications teased his mind. If he stepped in, where would he go? The Writings taught that all the archgates were connected to the Archgate of the Otherworlder. It was the central hub of the system on Aralon. To go to any other archgate, you had to first go to the Archgate of the Otherworlder. The Archgate of the Otherworlder was in turn connected to the realm of the Ancients, Maghra, the Otherworld, the superior realm from which the Ancients had come. Other archgates went to Ghalensa, the great Tree. When the Ancients departed back to Maghra at the end of the Dire Age, they were supposed to have taken all the keys to the gates with them. The Writings declared that they rendered the gates useless to anyone but themselves, should they ever need to return.

A dog barked, and another. Several of them. Hounds. They’d tracked his scent. He could hear movement outside the cave. He placed the orb and triangle on the floor and sped off to the entry chamber.

“In here,” he heard. “There’s an opening, a cave of some sort. Better have a look.”

Garrold fled back to the large chamber. He would have to hide in one of the smaller holes. He gathered his stuff.

“Looks like there’s a fire burning down here. I can see the orange glow. He must be nearby.”

He was trapped. Nowhere to go. Hiding was useless with the hounds. They’d sniff him out in seconds. He stood erect in the center of the chamber facing the shaft that led up to the cave entrance. He would be captured with dignity. He would–

The archgate was still exposed. He had to turn it off before they came, let it hide itself again. He couldn’t let them find it.

No, there is no way I’m going through that thing, he argued with the thought. Had he really even thought of using the gate to escape? He wasn’t sure. Wasn’t it already out of the question, ruled out as too dangerous? If it malfunctioned, he could be trapped forever in Olrhom.

You can flee now, use it. There it was again. A thought from deep within urging him to try. He had to try. Capture was unacceptable. He had to succeed. Evil could not be allowed to prevail.

He lifted the triangle-orb key from the ground and with all his stuff in tow he walked into the gateway. He may as well have walked into the side of the cave. Some invisible barrier smacked him as hard as solid rock. He bounced back and caught the triangle-orb before it fell and steadied himself. The gate only appeared to be open.

“Get me some hounds in here and pass me a torch,” came the voice of a Bower guard.

All this for nothing. Standing before an activated archgate and no way to enter, no way to evade capture, no way out. This was it. He’d failed again. Every time he seemed close to some breakthrough, all his plans came to naught. No wonder he was never elevated. Another moment of failure.


The time of his own choosing came
He squeezed the spor with might,
But when he opened up his palm,
The spor was dark as night,
The spor was dark as night.


I’d better deactivate the gate. As he bent to drop his pack and chest, the glint of his pendant flashed in his eye as it swung from his neck. He must have put it on while he recalled the minstrahl’s song earlier. It now dangled before him, just as the promise of success had often dangled before him, out of reach.

But no. He had this one. It was around his neck. Success struck him. The minstrahl’s words. The pendant is the key.

Yes, there it was, the pendant is the key.  It bore the image of the triangle and orb. How could he have been so ignorant? He pulled it from his neck, grabbed his pack and chest, and faced the gate.

“Halt!” A barking hound lunged at Garrold choking in its collar, the guard holding fast the leash. Garrold stood. More hounds and guards followed. They stayed clear of Garrold’s glowing triangle.

“Don’t even think about running into that tunnel. We’ll turn the hounds loose. Just turn that thing in your hands off, drop everything, and come with us. We mean you no harm.”

Garrold lifted the triangle toward them and grinned as they all drew back a bit, some in terror.

“If you truly meant me no harm, you would leave. You don’t have a clue what you’re up against at the Bower,” he said, giving the Equilateral another push toward them and watching them back away. “Give this message to Grand Holder Temmolin and Magna Ulberrin, the land is in great peril, beware the False Admonishers.”

And with that he touched the archgate with the pendant. He knew only a blinding flash before his whole world went black.




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Wednesday, September 23, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
POEMS OF DISCOVERY

Poetry Challenge: Write poems of discovery, of wonder, of amazement.  Be astonished with something, bewildered, perplexed, or in awe and reverence.



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Saturday, September 19, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
The Annals of Ghalensa:

Power to Remake



Sorry folks-- will post the next installment later today. It will be here shortly.  But I did make some modifications to this chapter based on suggestions.  See if you think they work better and make comments, please. 


POETRY CHALLENGE:  Today's chapter deals with relationships, treachery, and surprise.  Let's write poetry inspired by these aspects of life. Poems of relationships, treachery, and surprise-- especially all rolled into one!

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Chapter 3--Two of a Kind

          Garrold didn’t know whether to be excited, alarmed, or both. To be stealthily accosted within the Bower compound was bizarre; for it to be by Providers, that was from the empty places between worlds. He’d never heard a Provider before, but the written records told of their raspy voices. 

          They pointed out that the Ancients had noted his ability. He wanted that to be good, but it was too good to be true. Questions riddled his mind. How did they know him? Were they Admonishers? False Admonishers, Maghra forbid? 

          Nothing in the Writings supported their actions of stealth and death threats. The Book of Projections specifically asserted that the Ancients would only come in wrath if the Admonishers had not been heeded. No Admonishers had ever been sent. He had to warn Haknem and Kurdevon.

          Garrold reached into the folds of his robe and cupped his orb for comfort. Something about the smoothness and coolness soothed him. It gave him access to the power of the Tree. When he held it, he didn’t feel quite so helpless.

          Power surged in his hand. The familiar thrum reverberated throughout his body as he entered Olrhom, the realm of the orb, the realm between realms. 

          How could this be? He did not activate it. Never had the orb automatically activated before. As he went to drop it back in his pocket he sensed a presence in Olrhom, a sentience of great power. It came with no threat, no confusion, no animosity, no danger, only quiet. The presence sought him.

          Listen Garrold, the words were in his mind. They came with no voice, but it was clear that the sentience spoke. These are the defectors of Ghalensa come to do evil. Malevolence is in motion, and it’s moving fast. The whole world is changing. Evil power rises in Vikzyrn with Rezkelion, a renegade of the Ancients, he who comes with the hordes. He is born of a foul and wretched taint. He quietly draws strength from the Tree waiting to once again give the dark Heart of Morbidity the strength to beat its vile blood throughout the land. He must be defeated.

          “Who are you?” Garrold asked.

          I am a propagation, an energization, a creature formed of the power. I can only live within the power and it is the power that gives me being. It is too much to explain now. I cannot stay in one place very long or I will be found and destroyed.
 

          An Imitor, Garrold thought, a creature of fable.

          We are not of fable, Garrold, but know this, I was formed to help you stand against the Dark Heart, and it is for this purpose I exist. I will speak to you again, and aid you when I can, but for now I must go, the Ravers draw near to terminate me. Speak to no one of my existence.

           “Wait!” Garrold grasped at the creature, “Why me?”

          The voice trailed off, The spor, Garrold, because of the spor, and the prizmhata.

          “But I am nothing,” he objected, “no one listens to me, I have no authority.” There was silence. He stood waiting, squeezing the orb, not wanting to leave Olrhom until the Imitor came back to explain. Nothing came. He returned to the shadowy night of the Bower complex.
 

          The foreboding weight of impending peril descended upon him and he felt helpless. How could he stand against the Dark Heart? He was nothing; one little, unpopular, squelched magnhemist from Rudivia. This exceeded his scope and ability. He could not bear this. Kurdevon would handle it. His wisdom and ability were legendary. He had access to incredible resources. Kurdevon would know what to do.

          The Green Bower revoked Kurdevon from magnhemistry and exiled him from Rudivia years ago out of political expediency and jealousy. A group of preservationists rose up against him and concocted evidence claiming he taught things against the Writings. Temmolin ignored the facts of the defense and passed an unfair judgement against the Seer. In a rare case of injustice, Temmolin sold out on principle to please his constituents. It showed what he was capable of against his personal enemies.
 

          Garrold arrived at home, paused at his door, and took a deep breath to clear his mind. He called out to Elya before entering to avoid startling her. She had been waiting for him and rushed to his side. 
 

          “My heart-holder,” she said “what is wrong? What has shaken you so?” She already knew he was disturbed. She was perceptive that way.
 

          “Oh my love,” he squeezed her in a tight hug, “all is not well in the world.”

          He stepped back rubbing his wiry beard thinking how to say what he needed to say. Elya’s starry green eyes shone intently from deep within their sockets, urging him on. She leaned forward.

          “A few months ago Discerner Jaggeryn reported a problem to the Amalgama Council. He said that he and the Watchers had noted an irregularity in the pattern of the power such as has never been seen before.”

          “What do you mean? What kind of irregularity?”

          “There is a disturbance at the remotest edges of the power, farthest from each Bower and Thole. It is more prominent the farther north you go, away from the Highbower. The power is being drawn away somewhere.”
 

          “From the Bower of Ghalensa?” She queried.

          “Yes, where it exerts its weakest control.”

          “Could they explain it?”

          “No, but they were told to track it and report back as needed.”

          “So what came of it?”

          “With each passing thirdspan, the penetration of the drawing away moves closer to each Bower and Thole. It is stronger in the upper provinces of Covant, Rykor and Brugundia.”

          Her eyes widened. “You mean the Kingdom of Valorda and the Realm of Boravia.”

          Garrold cringed. He hated hearing them called by their new names. “That’s one of the problems,” he said, “there should be no separate kingdoms. They are rightfully provinces of Aralon. They have disturbed the power of the Tree. King Calindred restrains the true magnhemists and runs his own false order. Meanwhile, High Lord Shivaul and his Council of Seven use magnhemistry to support their own rule. That’s why they have been warring against each other for years, there is no order between them.”

          “Have they caused these disturbances?”

          “Maybe. They could have triggered it, or been a catalyst to it.”

          “How bad is it? Are we in danger?”

          “Jaggeryn reports that the drawing away seems to be focused in Vikzyrn just across the Void, somewhere deep in the Spitting Mountains.”

          “What does this mean, Garrold? Why haven’t the Providers responded?”

          “We don’t know, Elya, it’s troubling especially because we don’t have answers. We don’t fully understand it. Though the reach of the draw increases, the magnitude of the power does not. The drawn power is not reorganizing anywhere, it simply seems to vanish into the mountains, like its filling a big empty black hole.”

          “Have you talked to anyone else about this?”

          “Well, there’s a lot more to all this.” Garrold stopped to collect his thoughts and figure out how to present it to her. Elya backed into the couch and sat. 
 

          Garrold’s chest heaved. He slowly exhaled the full volume to relax himself, then continued, “I received a dispatch from Haknem telling me that the Seer Kurdevon warned him that there is a taint to it and that some Providers have defected.”

          “You’re not going to talk to that renegade Kurdevon, are you?”

          “Whatever gave you– Elya? You’ve spoken to your father, haven’t you?”

          Elya turned her head away, “He stopped by earlier.”

          Garrold sped across the room, took his wife’s arms, stood her up, and looked her in the eyes, “What did he want?”

          “Oh Garrold, it’s dangerous to meddle where you don’t belong. You could be charged with disrupting the Bower, and your ideas are unpopular. I just don’t want to see you hurt, I love you.”

          “I love you too, Elya, you know that, but I can’t have you consorting with your father behind my back. He is a crafty jen and he fills your head with ideas against me. He brings contention into our home. How can I be sure of your absolute support of me and agreement with me?”

          “I don’t always have to agree with you.”

          “That’s not what I meant.” He let her go and she sat again as he stepped aside. “I don’t mind when you disagree and we discuss matters. I respect your counsel and your views. You have always been a help to me. It’s just that when you talk to him, how can I be sure it is your disagreement and not his? How do I know if you have seen a flaw in my thinking or if it is the flaw your father put there?”

          “I think for myself, Garrold, I don’t just echo him. My ideas are my own. Do you think me a fool?”

          “Elya, no, that’s not it. You don’t get it. I’m not saying that.” He turned toward her, rubbed his face in both palms, dropped his arms, and went on, “He’s crafty. Sometimes he gets me believing something from the three moons. Only after much introspection and self-debate do I even realize how he planted his ideas in my head with craft and guile.”

          “Like how?”

          “Well, like, for instance, he got me believing the other month that I didn’t deserve to be elevated, that others deserved it more and would contribute more to the Bower than I could. I about convinced myself of it until I logically evaluated his arguments. I’m not one to compare myself with others, but I deserve to be elevated. I’ve deserved it for quite some time.”

          “But your thoughts, this progressionist stuff, it gets you into trouble.”

          “So do you think I’m wrong? Do the things I tell you about magnhemistry, about the Bower, about the Writings, do they not make sense?”

          “I believe you have good ideas, but your approach— can’t you be more accepting of the decisions made by the Bower Council? You might gain better access if you were supportive.”

          “I’ve told you before I’d have to compromise on the standards and principles I believe in, my integrity would be breached, and I’d be a politician, not a servant of Rudivia. You know I’m willing to compromise on personal issues and matters of interaction, but not on principles and standards which define what I believe is right.”

          Tears welled in her eyes. “You’re just as pig-headed as he is, Garrold. You and my father, you’re two of a kind. Why are the two most important jennah in my life so much the same and yet wholly against each other? Why can’t you both just get along?”
 

          He tried to pull her up to hug and comfort her as she sobbed into the crook of her arm, but she jerked away. So he eased himself beside her and wrapped his right arm around her. He didn’t know what to say, which was okay, because silence fit the moment better than anything else. He rubbed her back to soothe her and help her get it out. She often cried after a visit from her father. Garrold wished she would recognize it for herself. If he said anything about it they would just end up arguing the point making her cry again.

          This had not gone where he expected. He never got to tell her about the surprise threats from the hooded figures, nor the encounter with the Imitor. He couldn’t add it to this mess now. It would only fuel a fire he did not want to stoke.

          He loved her greatly. She was smart, loving, caring, very resourceful, and very beautiful. Well respected in the Bower, she proved herself a capable jenni. He was a fortunate jen to have such a wife. But her love for her father clouded her thinking, and Temmolin knew it. He despised his gin-son so much that he was willing to manipulate his own daughter against him. What a disgrace.

          “I’m sorry for upsetting you,” he finally said.

          “Can you get me some tea?” Her nose sounded plugged.
 

          He agreed and went to steep the tea in hot water from the hearth kettle. He served her and sat quietly in his favorite chair, sipping his own soothing blend. 

          “Is there anything he wanted me to know or anything you think I should know?”

          She sighed and nodded, “Yes, he said some wonderful things are going to happen in the Bower, that he was part of a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity, and that magnhemistry would be healed and unified. He warned me that the renegade Kurdevon was opposed to this opportunity and was already speaking against it to sow discord and disrupt the process. There will be some changes, he said, even as they have already started, and some will not like it. Some will say it is evil and has the taint in it.”

          Garrold gritted his teeth, felt fire rise in his eyes, and fumed out his flared nostrils, but he held his mouth. Something was terribly wrong. The taint was two steps ahead of everybody and everything.

          “Those who openly oppose it will be revoked,” she said and blew her nose. “He said the twilight of progressionist ideology is upon us and a new dawning of preserved magnhemistry will arise to bring new hope to the land. All who help will reap the benefits, the rest will be driven from it. Do you see why I am concerned for you?”

          Her words cut his heart like a sharpened blade, twisting. But they were not her words, they were Temmolin’s. No, not even Temmolin’s, but the hooded messengers of the one who comes with the hordes. 

          Was this it then? Had the Bower already been taken in deceit? Was it time to run? To hide? What treachery had been wrought while magnhemistry slept? How could he have missed it all so completely? Why was the Imitor so late? Who then was on his side and who would take him?
 

          “Oh Garrold, what will you do?”

          Her question lingered in the air. Only then did he recognize something else that also lingered there. Faint, hiding in the background, it was a familiar smell— the smell of Temmolin.

          “I plan to have a part in it,” he said. And with that he drew a long sip from his cup. Somehow, someway, he had to meet with Kurdevon, if he could get there first.



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Thursday, September 17, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
The Annals of Ghalensa:

Power to Remake

POETRY CHALLENGE: Today's chapter deals with an intense military action.  Write and post poems of war and peace, poems of conflict and resolution.  Let's be thankful for those who put themselves in harm's way to protect and preserve our freedoms and who face the hell known as war that we may secure peace in freedom rather than embrace the peace of control and slavery.

Also, just to let you know, the novel takes a twist today.
 It introduces a subplot that will soon merge with the main plot.
  This introduction of the character, Warner, is packed with action.

PLEASE, can you tell me what are some of the phrases and ideas
 that show the connection here with the rest of the story
 you have already read? 

It shouldn't be unnaturally or glaringly obvious,
but it shouldn't be cryptic or obscure either.
Let me know if it was reasonably portrayed in a manner
that makes you feel like you picked up on it
by natural observation and thinking. Thanks. 



Chapter 2

The Catastrophe of Nagaron




      Warner stared at the bizarre, jeweled dagger displayed in the case on his mantle. It was rich with memories. Many were not his own. If he touched it now, what memory would it give him, and whose memory might it be? So many memories, but no answers.

       The fire danced on half consumed logs, snapping, popping, beckoning. He was riveted, unblinking, on the blade. Tears filled his stinging eyes. A hint of walnut smoke hung in the air. Why had it come to him? Why had he kept it? The dagger had ruined his life. From an exotic assignment in a remote part of the world, kicking ass, to being a history teacher in Iowa, unsatisfied, unfulfilled. 

       Dubuque wasn’t so bad, he just needed more, challenges, adventure, exploration. He needed to live. He could take off and start all over. A tantalizing thought. But Dad needed him, and his kids at school. Their faces lit up as he made the pages of history live for them, dazzling them with the high adventures and wonders of the past. That was the fun part. The rest of the rigamarole of being a school teacher was about as thrilling as a bag of vacuum dust.

       Some would call him a coward for running. But how many people had the gumption to just leave everything that meant anything behind, and forge ahead, carving out a new life from scratch? It was a courageous leap into a new future. He could do it. He’d pull it off. He’d live better than his first life, which just went crazy from the moment he grabbed that damn dagger six years ago. 

       Six years ago already, the Catastrophe of Nagaron. Twenty Rangers and two choppers in, six Rangers and one chopper out. It was supposed to be a quick in and out. 

       Special Forces team, Bravo 23, would rappel into the Philippine Insurgent’s complex at Nagaron from two Blackhawk helicopters. Each bird carried an eight man ground team, Lizard Force One and Lizard Force Two. Lizard One would storm the thatched two-story structure at the edge of the thick woods and infiltrate it while Lizard Two secured the structure’s perimeter. The mission: Capture Generalissimo Rannie Aguilar, head of the Malynine Insurrectionists.

       “Resistance at Nagaron will be minimal. The bulk of the rebels have moved into the deeper north jungle for training, leaving Aguilar with only a few guards, ten at the most.”

       “A few and ten are quite different,” Warner said to the murmuring approbation of several Rangers, “so which is it?”

       Captain Lane frowned. “A few is figurative, soldier, there will be about ten.”

       “Well, bullets aren’t figurative. You say a few, you say ten, you get me confused. We like to know what we’re dealing with.”

       This operation bothered him. He wasn’t normally a difficult soldier, but this one had him unsettled. Antsy. Something wasn’t right. Command was holding back. Why capture Aguilar? Wouldn’t a lethal attack accomplish more? Maybe they could wipe out the whole complex, stop the movement. 

       Lane said they wanted to trade him for some twenty hostages, captured tourists being held for ransom. He’d never heard of such a thing. When did we start trading with terrorists? 

       “If you’ll excuse me, Sergeant Zimmerman, I’d like to continue.” 

       “I ain’t stoppin’ you,” he said, “just tell us like it is, our lives depend on it.” 

       “You tell him Zim,” Stu winked. 

       His buddies called him Zim. He liked that. Though he was popular, he often kept to himself. He didn’t go carousing as much as the rest of them. When they were off drinking and shooting pool, he’d be reading a book. His claim to fame was maul ball, their own special form of tackle soccer. He’d been the high school district wrestling champ back in Iowa and he liked to put his conditioning to good use on the soccer field. With his strong arms and legs, he was tough to bring down and was the top scorer.

       Many called him audacious. That’s only because he was daring. Stu, said it was because he was insolent. Stu was wrong and he made sure he knew it, and he didn’t want to ever hear it again. Stu was the only one who could ever get away with a comment like that, and just barely.

       “Okay,” Colonel Shelton intervened, “everyone simmer down and let the Captain do his job.” Special forces were allowed a lot of latitude to ask questions during mission briefs, but the Colonel steered this one back on track before it lost its way. 

       It was amazing that the Colonel was here. They hadn’t seen him in almost a year, and that was even just a one day visit. This time he came straight from Manila to personally oversee this mission. The Colonel had never come for any other mission, and had never so much as given more than a message of a few lines encouragement to his men. Why now?

       “Everyday at fourteen hundred hours,” Lane pointed with his stick at a map on an easel, “Aguilar retires to this structure here for a little beauty nap. There are two guards at the front of the structure on this side. Two more guards are inside the structure. There are no other ways in or out except for an escape tunnel under this floor that leads to this shack over here, two hundred yards away. There is one guard in this shack.”

       Umbarto, one of the pilots, shouted from the back of the room, “Where’s the other five?”

       “Just cool your jets, I’m getting there. First off, Lizard One will drop here, Lizard Two will drop here.” The drops were on opposite sides and triangulated to the main structure. 

       “Lizard Two will immediately surround and secure the perimeter while Condor Two takes out the shack to eliminate the escape route.” He looked directly at Umbarto, “You’ll want to leave a crater there.”

       The men chuckled. Lane loosened his grip on his pointer. 

       “Simultaneously, Lizard One will storm the structure, neutralize the exterior guards, and enter here at the front. Four men will secure the entryway and four will proceed down the immediate hall to the right, following it to the left directly into the master suite. Two guards will probably be here, and here, so watch as you turn the corner.”

       “And the other guards?” Umbarto asked. 

       Lane didn’t miss a beat. “Condor One will neutralize the watch tower, located across the complex here, where another guard will be. The four other guards are off duty and will either be sleeping here in this one story hut, or hanging out here in this long shack which serves as their chow hall and rec area.”

       Dillon interjected in his Texas drawl, “An’ how we gonna take them out?” 

       “That’s a good question,” Lane nodded, “Force Two, you’ll need to be ready to defend the perimeter from attack. It is likely,” he pointed on the map, “that they will attack from this direction here, but they could come from anywhere, just be ready. Condor Two will attack the rec center and keep a watch for the roving guards. Once they are located, Force Two, you’ll get support fire from the birds.” 

       Captain Lane went on to give them details on how to extract Aguilar and proceed back to the landing zone. He outlined ordnance to be used, expected weaponry of the enemy, and some tactical back-up plans. He also cautioned them to avoid the women and children in the “village” as he called it, an area of the complex where supporters, concubines, cooks, and other workers lived. No bad press. 

       They dubbed Aguilar, “Bongo,” named the target structure,  “Vega,” and gave code names to various other buildings. They also hashed out other details and clarified communications before Colonel Shelton was satisfied that his men were prepared. 

        As they milled about, dismissed from the briefing, Warner nudged Stu, “It’s a hokey mission, dude.”

       “Aw, come on Zim, we done worse and came out smellin’ roses.” 

        Zim laughed loudly. “That’s smelling like roses. If we came out smelling roses, we’d be dead.” Stu always mixed up his sayings with hilarious results.  

        Warner led Lizard One with Stu at his right hand. The Rangers took the structure, eliminated the guards, and secured the entryway. Warner left four men there and took Stu, Dillon, and Wetherby on to the master suite. Lizard Two easily secured the perimeter of the structure while Condor One and Two began to take out their targets. 

       “This is Lizard Two, we’re coming under heavy fire from the south, behind Vega, copy Condor Two?”

       “Condor Two, I’ll swing around to look,” Umbarto said.

       Warner could hear the action on his headset, which was wired in to their helmets. He took point as they rounded the corner toward Aguilar’s room, Stu behind to his right, Dillon to the left, and Wetherby in the rear. 

       “Holy shit,” it was Umbarto, “the damn jungle’s swarming with them.”

       “Swarming with what?” Colonel Shelton demanded from back at Command Ops. 

       “Rebels, must be fifty to a hundred, one armored vehicle, the forward elements are at the tree line on the ridge above Vega to the south.”

       “Can you give us cover, Condor Two, it’s heatin’ up down here.”

       “Condor Two, taking small fire, I’m buggin’ out, I’ll come back around.” 

        Umbarto must have flown into the mouth of the dragon. Warner could hear the pings and whizzes on his headset. 

       “Cover!” he screamed dropping to the floor. He fired his first shots at a target crouching behind a corner in front of Aguilar’s room. It was different from the map. The hall came to a “T” and the room was off to the left, not straight ahead, giving the guards plenty of cover.

       “There’s only one,” Dillon said over his headset. The radio had become a morass of confusion with a stream of panicky voices barking reports and making demands, not to mention Shelton asking what the hell was going on.

       A grenade flew overhead, thrown too hard, and landed behind them in the hall, just beyond Wetherby. The Rangers instinctively dropped and covered even as the hall shook with the explosion. Warner began a barrage of fire as he reached for a grenade of his own. Stu and Dillon brought their weapons to bear so Warner could throw it. 

       It did the job. The Rangers dashed around the wall, weapons ready. Warner fired a three-round burst into the sagging guard who was trying to raise his rifle. 

       “Zim, Weatherby’s down,” Stu said above the headset cacophony. Warner spun to see him back in the hall, his prone body in a pool of blood. 

       “Who’s down?” Shelton barked, “Report Lizard Two.”
       Stu and Dillon were already checking Wetherby while Warner stood guard. 

       “This is Lizard One, we’re in Vega, Wetherby is down– ”

       “He’s dead,” Stu cut in, “fragged in the neck. Got his artery. Let’s get Bongo and get out of here.”

       “Condor One is going down,” the pilot’s voice was matter-of-fact. “Something hit us, I’m spinning out.”

       The airwaves went silent for a few seconds. Then Wood, Lizard Two leader, called, “Condor Two can you strafe up front, we need cover.”

       Warner took a low spot. Stu and Dillon flanked him as he kicked the door open. Stu shot past on the right, Warner rolled in, and Aguilar stood center room with his hands up high.

       “We got the bastard,” Warner shouted. Stu yanked out his flex-cuffs and was on him in an instant.  

       “What bastard?” Shelton yelled back.

       Warner took a deep breath. “Bongo, we got Bongo.”

       Stu finished cuffing the man. A gunman popped up from behind the other side of the bed. With an explosive burst of rounds he shattered Stu’s face into a spray of red.  Stu crumpled like a dropped puppet. Aguilar, cuffed, ducked for cover. 

       Warner’s brain stopped. Blackness closed in, swelling, as the room became narrow and dim. His knees buckled. He fell backward, feeling the chill tickle of a burst of rounds just missing his face. Dillon returned fire. Another gunman fired at them from out of a closet just ahead.

       There was no time to think, only act and react. Warner seized himself back from the clutches of vertigo. He grabbed the cuffed Aguilar by the collar and yanked him to his feet. Using Aguilar as a shield, he spun toward the closet gunman. It was only then that he came face-to-face with the prisoner and realized it wasn’t Aguilar at all. It was one of his guards, a stand-in. They’d been tricked.

       Instantly, the man’s nostrils flared and a voiceless scream fell mute as his eyes glossed to a blank and sightless stare. Blood dripped from the corner of his gaping mouth. In spite of wearing a flak vest, Warner strained to hold his heavy shield in place as he unloaded toward the closet. The wall ripped, the door jamb splintered, and a lifeless form slumped forward.

       Dillon let loose another burst of rounds at the gunman behind the bed, the real Aguilar, who returned fire and caught him across the front of his legs at the knees. Dillon thumped to the floor. Warner dropped his lifeless burden, spun, and fired into Aguilar’s side. The man jerked unnaturally as his weapon sprang from his hands. A crimson streak appeared across his left biceps.

       Warner pointed, finger on trigger, and stopped. The mission. Don’t kill him, capture him. Aguilar strode for his weapon but Warner leapt upon him and began to wrestle him to the floor. Aguilar, over fifty, proved to be a toughened veteran of hand-to-hand combat. 

       Warner strained to pin the old man, but Aguilar’s gnarly steel-like arms held him at bay. They were nearly in a stalemate when Aguilar violently snapped his forehead into the bridge of Warner’s nose. A bright flash accompanied the pain that shot through his eyes and head as his helmet flew off. Aguilar seized the offensive. Warner twisted and ducked to avoid a choke-hold, landing on his back, pinned against the side of the bed. 

       Out of nowhere Aguilar thrust a gleaming blade toward his heart. He snagged the wrist. Aguilar pummeled him with his other fist in quick, chopping punches, unable to fully extend his injured biceps. It was enough, however, to free the dagger. Aguilar came slashing back with the blade.

       Warner missed the wrist, this time, but deflected it enough so that the blade sliced across the side of his upper cheek bone and temple, narrowly missing his right eye. The tip caught the inside upper curl of his ear and pierced it through. 

       He howled in urgent rage. His own blood splattered on his arm and the back of his hand as he pushed Aguilar away. The old man came slashing back again. Warner took the blade on the forearm with a block. More pain, more blood. This wasn’t going well.

        The room began to darken again. Dizziness crept in, but he fought back. He was fading from consciousness. He couldn’t succumb. This man had killed his best friend. This man wanted to kill him. This man needed to die. He pushed away the vertigo. Did he have enough? 

       Warner swung his arm toward the dimming visage of Aguilar. His fist missed completely, but his forearm caught the squirrel-like man in the throat with a solid thud. It sucked the force out of Aguilar’s thrust and Warner snagged his wrist again. This time he locked on. This time, he wouldn’t let go. He was focused now. This was for Stu. Aguilar must die. 

       With a deep groan, more like a bear’s growl, he lunged into a balance twist-over, a wrestling move he developed using the force of his foe’s reaction to flop him onto his own back. He executed it sloppily, but Aguilar grimaced in agony as his wounded left arm was driven into the floor. He struggled to right himself, but Warner pushed harder, still holding fast the right wrist, watching the blade. He squeezed and wrenched it with all his might, twisting it more and more, bending it back in ways a wrist was not meant to bend, pushing until he couldn’t push any more. Let the damn blade go. One more little jerk and the dagger finally fell.

       Warner’s strength abandoned him. How could this old man keep going? Aguilar pulled away, groping for the blade. No way. Warner held his shaky grip on Aguilar’s arm. The man twisted toward the dagger but Warner managed to get the side of his boot on it first and flicked it away. He threw his weight into the old man. They sprawled together on the floor. Warner kept driving until he had the man’s arm twisted up behind his back. Aguilar refused to quit. He squirmed and twisted to pull free as if the pain meant nothing. Warner stayed with him, lunged onto the writhing man, and finally flattened him a foot from the beckoning dagger. He heaved a breath of sweaty air, smelling Aguilar’s foul odor, and his own. There he laid, face-to-absent-face with Stu’s bloodied corpse. 

       Blood rushed into his own forehead. His face tightened as he lurched forward and planted a knee in the center of Aguilar’s back. Aguilar flailed wildly, but Warner was transfixed now. He grabbed a handful of the man’s still thick hair and wrung his neck back. 

       “Don’t kill him, Zim,” it was Stu's voice.

       “He killed you, Stu.” Warner swiped the blade from the floor.

       “The mission, remember the mission.” It was Dillon, not Stu. He dragged himself forward on his bloody knees as if to offer help. Warner’s eyes blurred with tearsor was it that his vision changed? New memories flooded his brain, memories that were not his. The old man enjoyed giving pain, enjoyed killing. He knew it as real as Aguilar himself. The memories of pain and torture were sharp, they were his own now, but Warner had never done such things. Aguilar did. Aguilar had killed for pleasure. It was vile, wretched. He must die.

       “The mission, Zim.”

       In a smooth, arched motion, Warner drove the blade deep into Aguilar’s throat, then a second time, and a third. Aguilar’s flailing stopped and his gurgling ended in one last bubbly exhale.

       It was war. Die or be killed. What else was he supposed to do? The blade was meant for his own neck. He killed in self-defense. It was his duty. Why the remorse?

       I failed the mission, he thought. I was supposed to capture him. What did I do? I could have stopped myself. Why didn’t I stop?

       A resounding blast shook Vega. He turned to look at Dillon, only he didn’t look quite right. His colors were off. The air vibrated around him. Dillon was outlined. Puzzled, he brought his hand up, open-palmed, to look at the dagger.

       It had about an eight-inch black carbon-steel blade, double-edged, and a six-inch carved wooden grip set with a silver mount in which was a highly polished, deep blue, rounded, glasslike stone jewel, almost the size of a quarter. The jewel had an ethereal quality and seemed to glow with a light of its own. Fascinated, he sank back, propped against the side of the bed.

       “Zim, get with it, come on man, help me out.” 

       Stu was gone. Wetherby was gone. And God knew who else was gone. The steady, loud cracks of the firefight, interspersed with sporadic explosions, were no less intense than when the action had started. Only now did he again notice them. They were getting closer.

       He sprang to his feet grabbing a cloth from off the back of a chair. He quickly wrapped the dagger and shoved it into his thigh pocket as he crossed toward Dillon. 

       The door burst open. My rifle. Dillon still had his and swung it at the intruders. They were friendlies.

       “What the hell went on in here?” Sergeant Wood asked as he rushed to Dillon’s aid. Three others burst through the door. Warner grabbed his rifle and helmet.  

       Dillon’s knees were shattered. At least one round had hit each one. An unlikely event in the worst scenario, yet there it was. Flak vests don’t cover knees. Dillon seemed stoic against the pain. Warner donned his helmet. The cacophony of the radio returned. 

       Others helped Dillon as Wood conferred with Warner.

       “We’re surrounded, Vega’s surrounded. Must be at least thirty of them left, but we got their armored trak. Your men at the front door are dead, all four. We got ‘em in the hall now.”

       “Damn it.” Warner’s gut knotted and his heart felt like it left his body in a hot air balloon. 

       “You and Dillon are all that’s left of Lizard One. Me and these three are all of Lizard Two. Condor One is down, but Condor Two is covering the front door. The stairway’s been destroyed, and the tunnel, so unless there’s another way in, we bought some time. Of course, the only way out is up right now.”

       “Umbarto,” Warner called into his mike, “This is Lizard One, can you maneuver over the south rooftop of Vega and drop a line?”

       “Roger that, good to hear you, Zim – ” 

       “Where the hell you been, soldier,” Shelton cut in, “do you have Bongo?” 

       “No Bongo, Bongo’s dead, gotta get out of here, we’ve been overrun.”

        Warner ignored whatever Shelton yelled next. Warner looked at Wood, “This way,” he pointed toward the closet. They pulled the dead gunman away while two others helped Dillon and the third watched the door.

       “Umbarto, we’ll be coming out on the southeast side, how’s it look?”

       “Looks good, low fire that side, you’ve got some goons throwing ropes up front, though.”

       Warner reached up in the closet and pulled on the clothes bar, yanking it out of the way. It revealed a crude lever in the wall which he pulled to open a drop-down hatch in the ceiling. The hinged hatch unfolded into a short ladder which hung three feet off the floor. It was enough to grab and pull himself up into a small compartment directly under the thatched roof. The compartment was no more than six by six, walled off from the rest of the attic. There was a handle on the underside of the thatching. He pushed it open to reveal daylight.

       “Is that you Lizard One.”

       “That’s me, Condor, get as close as you can.”

       Wood helped Dillon and the others up as Warner went out on the roof. Condor Two’s line hung just three feet distant as the bird rhythmically chopped away some forty feet up. The door gunner protected the southern approach. Some fire was coming from the front. The rebels seemed to be catching on to the escape plan. They had no way of knowing whether their general was alive or not, or if he was captured, so they held back.   

       Warner propped himself on the roof peak to return fire to the north. The others loaded Dillon into a basket to be hoisted up first, then Stu’s corpse and Wetherby’s, then the other four. There was no way to get the rest from the jungle below. They hated to leave them. Wood plopped down next to Warner to help return fire as his men went up. The evacuation was moving smoothly and rapidly.

       “How’d you know about the roof hatch?” Wood asked.

       How did I know? I don’t know, I just knew, like I knew it was there all along, like I live here. The dagger showed me, just as it showed me what a twisted man Aguilar was.

       “I saw a diagram down in the room,” he said.

       It wasn’t a lie. He didn’t say what type of diagram he’d seen. If Wood assumed it was drawn, so be it. 

       Wood followed his men up. Warner went last, even as several goons burst into the room and began to shoot in his direction. Up and away the helicopter went and the scene of insanity faded into the distance.

       The Catastrophe of Nagaron. Hushed by command, classified top secret, and filed away in the dark recesses of bureaucracy. It never happened. 

       Shelton charged Warner with abandoning the mission in an act of bloodlust. Upon questioning, Dillon had reluctantly told the review board exactly what he saw in Aguilar’s room. It wasn’t his fault. He just told what he saw. It was enough, though. Warner’s discharge went through quickly. 

       The jet engines of the Air Force C-141 transport screamed in his ears all the way across the Pacific as he hung in the web seating wondering what awaited him back in Dubuque. It hadn’t been much. 

       The fireplace snapped and cackled loudly as if mocking him.  Six years later and nothing. Life was a bore. The dagger had taken it all, and yet he had taken the dagger.

       A woman screamed. She was a Filipino. The dagger had cut her. Aguilar smiled. Warner jerked his hand open and the dagger dove point first into a log near the hearth. The blue stone pulsed. The vivid mental image dissolved, but the memory remained. It was now one of his own. 

      Oh my God, when did I pull the dagger from its case on the mantle? How long have I been holding it?

       He stepped back and sat on the easy chair behind him. A stream of sweat tickled its way across the thin scar on his upper right cheek, down his face, and hung precariously on the edge of his chin. He fingered the notch in the curl of his right ear and thought that maybe running away wasn’t such a bad idea after all. But where could he go to remake himself? 

       The pulsing stone again caught his attention. He wasn’t ready to give up the blade. It owed him. Besides, how many daggers gave memories? Or anything, for that matter? There was something more to this blade. He had to find out. It will be the last thing I do before leaving Dubuque. He smiled as he reached down to grasp it’s hilt and pull it from the log.



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Tuesday, September 15, 2009 

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The Annals of Ghalensa: 
Power to Remake



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Chapter 1: The Dispatch

 
     Magnhem Garrold, Master of Magnhemsitry, stood in his arched chamber window staring off into the distance. The setting sun shone in all its effulgent blue and green glory behind the distant hills of Evinshear, his home parcel. He turned his orb over and over in his hand, enjoying its cool glasslike smoothness. He remembered the first time he had ever felt that soothingly cool sensation, that very exciting dawn when he first held the spor.

     That dawn was etched in his memory above all others. Through the years he rehearsed it again and again in the scenes of his mind, especially at every Occasion of Remembrance, when all magnhemists were to contemplate the duties the spor had called them to.

    
A knock at the door jolted him out of his musings. It was the double knock of a student, perhaps one of his own. He spoke just loud enough to penetrate the thick norshwood door, "Enter." 
     

    
The student entered. Garrold did not turn to look. Instead he continued to stare at Evinshear out his chamber window, high up on the eighth level of the Bower. The student stood, waiting for him to acknowledge.

    
"Go ahead, young jennah," he said, still peering out the window.

    
"Magnhem Garrold, Apprentice Dyorin presenting, sir. I have a dispatch for you from Grand Holder Haknem of Yarowglan. He says it is urgent and that you should attend to the matter at once."

    
Garrold remembered his days as an apprentice. As the years passed, his dedication to his studies and his abilities in magnhemistry earned him some rapid elevations in several Houses through the levels of Learner, Apprentice, Watcher, and Artisan, to his current level of Magnhem, a master of magnhemistry. Ten years from Learner to Magnhem was quite remarkable. But for the past five years, he had been stuck at Magnhem. It had to be Temmolin.


    
Garrold had tried in vain over the years to win his support. When he fell in love with Temmolin's daughter, that just complicated matters. After a contentious courtship, Garrold married Elya anyway, still hoping that it might eventually soften Temmolin's heart. It only made him angrier, and gave him more access to make Garrold's life miserable.

    
Why all the hatred? The spor had, after all, chosen him, even if it had not gone as expected. He thought for sure that Temmolin would lose his anger over time, but instead the grudge grew deeper and deeper. Temmolin acted nice enough around Garrold in mixed company, but drove him to no end of grief outside the public eye. 

    
Temmolin despised Garrold and used his influence to suppress him. He had once declared that so long as both of them set foot in the same parcel, he would stand against him. Temmolin was a jen of his word. That’s why Garrold had again been passed over.

    
Passed over for the tenth straight time. How long would he have to wait to be elevated to Proficum, or even get a shot at Magna? He would never make Magna at this rate, and yet he had to. The people needed him. Magnhemistry needed him. If he could just make Magna some dawn, he would fix everything. He would do good for all the people and lead them into progress. But if he didn’t elevate soon, he’d be a Magnhem for the rest of his life. Trapped. Stifled.

    
He squeezed his orb. He had so much more to offer, so much more to give. Why had they held him back? Why were his unique abilities ignored? Everyone heard the voice cry out that he was chosen for a special purpose.

    
Questions weren’t getting him anywhere. He needed to take action, do something, but what? Those who withstood him were all magnhemists of reputation. He squeezed his orb again, harder. His eyes fumed. What could he do that wouldn’t ruin him further? He was already held in derision by too many.

     
Garrold turned and took the dispatch from Dyorin and sent him on his way. He scrutinized the seal on the scroll. The orange wax wad bore the imprint of the Grand Holder’s emblem, the Orange Bower encircled by nine three-pointed stars representing the nine jennah provinces, and one large five-pointed star above the tower representing the Province of Ghalensa, the great Tree itself. At the base of the tower stood an image of a Grand Holder, presiding over an Occasion.

     
He knew the specific nicks and imperfections of the genuine seal of Grand Holder Haknem of Yarowglan. Satisfied with its authenticity, he broke the seal, unrolling the parchment. After the greeting, the body of the message read:

          The Seer Kurdevon informed me with urgent seriousness that some sort of aberration exists within the pattern of the power of the Tree that indicates a grave threat to the stability of Aralon. There is, as he sees it, a growing concentration and draw on the power occurring in the midst of Vikzyrn, somewhere in the Gozim Desert. He also noted a distinct shift in the pattern centering in upper Vikzyrn, at or near the Salt Cove. 

     Though I suggest we approach this carefully and without undue alarm, I must tell you that he seemed somewhat distressed as he relayed the following words to me, "Something is going on over there, I don’t know what, but it’s not good. No, it’s bad, very bad. There’s a taint to it. The power is being manipulated, bent– surreptitiously. This is no random aberration. There’s an intelligence in it. Someone is taking great care to avoid notice. We must seek the answer, we must know what malady would take us."

     I dare not speculate about, yet I cannot ignore, the rumors he also mentioned, from Keistowne, which tell of a dissension among the Providers and their inquiries for the whereabouts of a certain number of defectors. The rumors all vary as to number and give no names. He intimated the likelihood of a correlation between the change in the pattern of the power and these events, though he had no proof. He promised to continue to seek answers and will inform me of his discoveries. For now, he said, "Beware Vikzyrn, beware and watch for changes in the pattern of the power. All is not well."
 
     Whereupon, Garrold, I took it upon myself to immediately communicate these happenings to you, knowing you to be expert in such matters, and my good friend. I ask also that you allow me to inform Kurdevon of your interest in these matters and your knowledge of The Writings and true history of Aralon, inviting him to contact you instead of me, as that will be more profitable for Aralon. Please inform me without delay if this is agreeable to you and I will have Kurdevon contact you by dispatch using my seal.

     I don’t have to tell you, but it is prudent anyway, to please destroy this dispatch at your soonest opportunity. I am at your service and ever your friend. Peace to Aralon. It is as it is.
 
    Garrold gazed into the walls of his chamber as if seeing through them, yet seeing nothing. His blank stare helped him to think, to focus deep within himself as he thought on Haknem and the dispatch. Discerner Jaggeryn had recently reported a problem to the Amalgama Council saying that he and the Watchers had noted an irregularity in the pattern of the power such as had never been seen before. They were told to watch and report any new developments.

    
Haknem's  dispatch was certainly a new development, but it was not one Garrold would be discussing with anyone soon. He needed to keep it confidential until he knew more. It was never good to become too alarmed over hearsay. He needed more facts.

    
Garrold met Haknem many years earlier when they were both Apprentices, himself in the Green Bower, Haknem in the Orange Bower. The border parcels between their two provinces, Yarowglan south and Rudivia north, had been experiencing inconsistencies in weather that resulted from shifting variations in the power of the Tree. Yarowglan sent a delegation of magnhemists to Rudivia to discuss ways to coordinate working the power in these parcels to avoid these problems.

    
All the younger ranks of the delegation, Learners and Apprentices, stayed in the dormitory of the Green Bower. Garrold coordinated a work crew which included Haknem. Among the Evinfolk, even guests were put to work. The Evinfolk enjoyed hard work. Anything worth having required good counsel and hard work. Anything easy held little value.

    
Garrold immediately took a liking to Haknem because of the quality of his work and his pleasant demeanor. One night they stayed up late and spoke for several hours regarding background, family, plans, ideas, ambitions, and Vikzyrn. Yes, Vikzyrn, the forbidden topic. Well, it wasn’t really forbidden. There was no law against it, but you would have thought so by the way everybody treated it.

    
The Writings condemned it as a wasteland of all that is vile, poison, and evil. The Histories hardly mentioned it. The Proposals declared it to be the very seat of the turbid side of the power, the festering center of all that is grim and hideous, the Dark Heart of Morbidity. In all practicality, access to Vikzyrn did not exist. The Void, that ever-impassable, seething chasm, had stood defiantly between Aralon and Vikzyrn since the Great Shaking some twenty-six hundred years earlier.

    
Garrold and Haknem agreed that Vikzyrn hid many secrets of the past, protected secrets, whether by Providers or by their Bowers. Certain wild stories spoke of a decrepit race of beings hiding in the contorted forests and roughs of Vikzyrn, living in the murkiest parts of the world. After all, what had become of the thousands upon thousands of people trapped there after the Great Shaking? The Writings claimed that all perished, but legend spoke otherwise.

    
There were the scrawks, large, flying reptiles that came from the mountains of Vikzyrn. Some now lived in the higher parts of the Spitting Mountains of Aralon. They were meat eaters. So what meat did they feed on in Vikzyrn? What creatures became their food? A land full of scrawks and edible creatures did not sound like a dead land to them.

    
A scrawk once strayed from Vikzyrn over the Spitting Mountains into western Rudivia. Local villagers hunted it down and killed it. Its bowels contained the skeletons of several creatures, including a five foot biped. The Green Bower concluded they were the remains of an urlani hermit who had taken to the mountains. But some firsthand witnesses told a different tale. They said they had found a strange bauble, unlike any made throughout all Aralon and Ghalensa. After authorities from the Green Bower arrived, the bauble disappeared. Rumor had it that the bauble was secured in the vaults of the Green Bower.

    
Garrold asked about this bauble a number of years ago. His overseers dodged the issue. When he pressed further, he was met with disdain. Finally, when he became publicly vocal, he received a formal reprimand. They told him his actions would only cause confusion and contention in the Bower and to leave such matters alone.

    
"Magnhemists are not to concern themselves with rumor and speculation," they warned, "but are to attend to their studies and the service of their province with a steady mind."

    
"If there’s no bauble," he insisted, "then it couldn’t hurt to search through the storerooms and vaults and lay the rumor to rest once and for all."

    
"Obstinance and disregard will only find you put out of the Bower," they said.

    
So concluded his quest. Look into the matter further, and be put out. He could do nothing but bide his time, learn and grow, and master magnhemistry. Maybe some dawn he would be in a position to change things, to get to the bottom of these glossed-over matters. But that dawn seemed far away with all the opposition from Temmolin and his followers. Garrold had already waited far too long. The stiff, religious ways of his Bower were getting him nowhere.

    
Rudivia and Yarowglan had been close allies since the time of The Settling, when the Ancients sent the Providers to establish the Art of Magnhemistry. The Providers built the Bowers and Tholes, defined the provincial borders, issued the first of The Writings, and became the overseers and preservers of the power of the Tree. They established nine provinces out of the remnants of what had been the four old jennah kingdoms before the Great Shaking.

    
The Evinfolk primarily populated the three western provinces carved out of the old Kingdom of Evindehl. Rudivia was the northernmost of the three provinces, then came Yarowglan in the middle, and Sylvhen farthest south extending all the way to the lower coast.

    
The Evinfolk were the smallest of the jennah. True, they were slightly taller than the Boors, growing to a height of six feet, while the Boors only grew to five and a half. But the Boors had broad, husky frames that gave them greater girth. Evinfolk had smaller frames. The other two varieties of jennah, Vales and Ahnjin, were both taller peoples. The Vales grew to seven feet tall, and were well built making them the largest, while the Ahnjin grew to about six and a half feet.

    
Evinfolk led simple lives, loving woodcraft and farming, and preferring country life to city life. They embraced no weakness or fragility, being unafraid to face challenges and challengers bigger than themselves. They were also a friendly sort, so long as you did not cross them. Any injustice pretty much crossed them. Zealous of fairness and equity for all jennah, they took sides with anyone being treated unfairly, Evinfolk or not.

    
The urlani were a different matter. Most Evinfolk held a deep seated mistrust and hatred for them based on a legend which told of a horrible and cruel slaughter the urlani inflicted upon the jennah, mostly all Evinfolk, after the time of the Great Shaking. The common versions of the tale placed the slaughter in Vikzyrn. Despite the hazy details, many considered it historical fact.

    
Garrold, however, despised how his people treated the urlani. The Writings merely affirmed that all in Vikzyrn perished, but did not say how. A slaughter of the distant past from a turbulent time of unrecorded history did not provide a sound basis for suspicion and mistrust. Those were different urlani in a different situation from a different age. Why blame the present urlani for what their ancestors had done?

    
Garrold went and sat at his desk to reread the dispatch. He wanted to help Haknem, but how could he devote any time to this dilemma without being detected by his opponents in the Bower? Temmolin would certainly demand explanations and cause him trouble at every turn. And Temmolin was sure to have the support of Magna Ulberrin.

    
Magna Ulberrin worked hard to keep the magnhemists of the Green Bower united despite the rift between the two main differing schools of thought. Those known as Progressionists advocated a flexible adherence to the Order of Magnhemistry, one in which they were free to progress and develop by exploring new possibilities. They proclaimed that magnhemistry should be dynamic and vibrant to better meet the needs of succeeding generations. They warned against the current trend of a rigid, systematic, and rote adherence to The Writings, going so far as to say that the Ancients never intended magnhemistry to be religious and ritualistic.

    
The Preservationists, on the other hand, declared that tradition must be maintained above all else, and a strict adherence to the Bower’s interpretation of The Writings must be enforced. They held that experimentation and exploration outside the parameters declared by the Bower and its long line of Magnas, was nothing more than dabbling in dark matters. They placed emphasis on the rituals and Occasions that made them who they are, and avoided all controversial issues regarding the Histories.

    
Magna Ulberrin gave allegiance to neither school of thought but advocated aspects of both. Nonetheless, when pressed on issues, he clearly tended to lean toward the preservationist ideas. He forbad the formal organization of any separate schools of thought. All magnhemists were to work together and continue in open dialogue regardless of their personal inclinations. He also affirmed that every magnhemist had the privilege to think as freely as he desired in his own mind, but was bound by duty to act only according to the sound practices and accepted standards of the Bower. Any new ideas were to be submitted to the Magna and his counselors for years of careful consideration and scrutiny so they could be fully researched before being released to the Bower.

    
This sounded fair and equitable on the surface, but with deeper scrutiny it was clear that this policy did more damage to stunt the forward movement and growth of magnhemistry than it did to preserve the integrity of it. Since anything that is not growing is dying, and anything that is dying is no longer whole and has lost its integrity, then this policy would ultimately undo the integrity it sought to preserve.

    
Since the time of his unusual Occasion of Choosing, Garrold always found himself in the midst of controversy. Some called him a dissenter, others proclaimed him a visionary thinker. Some accused him of being loose and undisciplined, yet others maintained he was detailed and meticulous. The hardline Preservationists accused him of undermining the Bower. The Progressionists heralded him as a pillar of the Bower and regarded him as their defacto leader.

    
It’s too bad he didn’t serve the Orange Bower, like Haknem, where there were great opportunities for forward thinkers to be elevated. By way of Haknem, many of his ideas already enjoyed open discussion in Yarowglan, especially the effort to rebuild a more accurate record of jennah history. The secrets of Vikzyrn needed to be exposed. His research regarding such matters excited Haknem and the Orange Bower, hence, the urgent dispatch he now held.

    
Five solid raps sounded at his door, definitely not a Learner or Apprentice. Then he heard the gruff and penetrating voice he had learned to loathe.

    
"Open up, Garrold, it’s me, your gin-father."

    
Grand Holder Temmolin. He could hardly believe it. Already at the door and the dispatch hardly minutes old. Temmolin hated that his own daughter, Elya, had married Garrold. Despite his disgust with the marriage, Temmolin never missed an opportunity to sneeringly rub his status as Garrold’s gin-father in his face. He patronized Garrold far more than mere tone would suggest. To make matters worse, Temmolin not only backed the preservationist ideology, he was probably even its leader.

    
Temmolin made Garrold’s life miserable while he grew up, hoping to chase him away. He even went so far as accusing him of not really loving Elya. He claimed Garrold married her and took his daughter away from him just to spite him. All ridiculous accusations. Garrold loved his wife and hated the contention he had with his gin-father.

    
Garrold thought for a moment that maybe he should ignore Temmolin’s knock and leave him standing in the hall. He could sit quietly until he left. But alas, protocol obliged him and so he resigned himself to opening the door. 

    
Temmolin pushed his way into the chamber and verbally assaulted Garrold with his interrogation. "What does he want now? You know that he should communicate with me as his counterpart in Rudivia. Where’s the dispatch? Let me read it."

    
Garrold presented his ash can to Temmolin with a wry smile. Temmolin slapped it out of his hands with a loud clang.     

    
Garrold darted for the careening can, hoping to minimize the spread of ashes around his chamber.

    
"What the vik did you do that for?" Garrold said, scooping ashes off the floor.

    
"I’m sick of your antics, you little mung." Temmolin poked an accusative finger at Garrold. "If I had my way I’d have you scourged and thrown out on your ears for the disgrace you are to magnhemistry. Always conniving, you and your little friend Haknem from that messed up Bower with its bogus practice of magnhemistry. As the Grand Holder of Rudivia, I demand you tell me every detail of that dispatch or I’ll drag you before the Magna, so help me."

    
So went the typical conversation between them. Others regarded it a mere "domestic dispute," or "familial fracas," wishing to avoid contention with the Grand Holder. After all, The Grand Holder held the top position in the House of Officiators, only two levels away from the Magna himself. With that kind of authority, Temmolin got away with almost anything in the way of verbal abuse. But his threats were not as serious as they sounded. The many checks and balances within the Order of Magnhemistry kept things stable. His verbal tirades rarely produced tangible results other than to cause his listeners to either cower in fear or storm off in rage. 

    
Garrold went through both phases in his dealings with Temmolin. He eventually learned to just stare back, not saying a word, until Temmolin cooled off or stormed off in his own rage. But Temmolin had gone too far this time, slapping the can out of his hand and calling him a mung, a no-good, dirty, urlani savage.

    
Despite Temmolin’s abusive actions, Garrold regretted that he had responded in the vulgar, summoning the curse of Vikzyrn with the short form, vik. He forced himself to focus on cleaning up the ashes. It had a calming effect. So much so that the next few sentences of madness emitted from Temmolin’s mouth became just so much background noise while Garrold composed himself. Temmolin had never resorted to violence before and this new behavior alarmed Garrold.

    
"The dispatch was personal," he said, "a simple letter between old friends to catch up on social news."

    
Temmolin drove each word into Garrold, "People don’t burn social letters from friends." Temmolin scowled down the bridge of his long nose, victorious in his point, and then continued, "Pull it out of your pocket and let me see it. Do you really think you’d dupe me? Do you think I don’t know those ashes have been long cold and there hasn’t been a wisp of smoke in this chamber for hours? Do you take me for a fool? Hand it over."

    
The keen old grouse had him. Judging High Court required skill in perceiving subtle clues. Over these many circuits, Temmolin had countless hours of repetitive exposure to a multiplicity of diverse people and situations. He honed his skill into a fine art. He was a true master, and a tremendously accomplished Grand Holder. All held him in high regard for his work. He had heard some very tough cases, and passed very fair and lasting judgements. Garrold admired his ability. Temmolin’s accomplishments and his esteem in the province made it that much more difficult for Garrold to speak out against his personal attacks, and to seek relief for the constant turmoil that he caused.

    
Garrold sighed, calm to the bones. "I’m sorry, sir, the dispatch is addressed to me and it is intended for me, therefore I will not give it up unless a proper warrant is issued for it, but I will tell you this, in addition to the personal communication there is mention of a certain lunatic Seer who asserts that there is a strange concentration of the power in central Vikzyrn."

    
"Who is this Seer?" Temmolin shot back.

    
"Kurdevon." Garrold wished he could have thought more quickly how to evade the question but he could not bring himself to lie outright, especially not to the Grand Holder. Rather than to appear to be holding back other information he freely gave the name. Would he come to regret it?

    
"Oh," Temmolin’s brow furrowed in surprise, "that crackpot. I doubt anything sane came from him, nevertheless, I will inform the Magna. Was that it?"

    
"Haknem said he would check it out and let me know."

    
"Very well, I expect you to report to me as soon as you know more, understand?"

    
"Yes," Garrold acceded, "now if you’ll excuse me I need to visit the draw."

    
"Let it never be said," Temmolin chortled as if he and Garrold were concluding a pleasant interlude between friends, "that I have stood in the way of a jennah and his business. Again, my gin-son." And with that he whisked himself away, out the door and down the hall, leaving Garrold silently fuming over how rapidly he could swing from antagonistic insanity to friendly chatter. Temmolin used this cleverly crafted ruse to deal with people. He kept them off-guard and got them to say things they really had not expected to say.

    
Garrold kicked himself for having mentioned Kurdevon. But he had succeeded in holding out on other information. If Temmolin thought the dispatch covered more, he would still be in the chamber grilling Garrold. Whether he needed to use the draw or not. As it was, Garrold really did need it. He locked his door and silently made his way down the hall. On his way, he realized he was hungry and ought to go find something to eat in the mess hall afterward.

*           *         *

    No one else was in the dining room eating. Supper had ended some time ago and the servants, kojen, were busy finishing with clean-up.

    
"Ho there," Garrold called to one, "let Reston know I’m about, will you?" The kojen nodded, recognizing the robe of a Magnhem, and ran off quickly with his appointed task. The vast majority of kojen, non-magnhemists, lived out and about in the villages, towns and cities of Aralon, but a certain number applied for service in the Bower. Those chosen by the magnhemists became Bower kojen and enjoyed a certain elevated status of respect among other kojen, even beyond the terms of their service. Many served for a lifetime, but others served terms of four to six years.

    
"Garrold, my friend," a broad smiling face intoned, led by a steaming platter of glazed rorx over delicately boiled rice with a side of fresh greens. Rorx was a favorite game bird throughout all Aralon, a light delicate meat. Garrold was convinced none could prepare it as well as Reston Qintar Chefjen. "You look well, Garrold, please sit and enjoy, I’ll fetch some wine."

    
"No, no," Garrold waved his hand for Reston to come forward, "please sit with me, I need to talk."

    
Reston turned to one of his workers and sent him after some wine, cheese, and crusty bread. Turning, he waited for Garrold to sit down in front of his succulent, aromatic platter. Then he took the seat opposite.

    
"How’s that lovely wife of yours?" Garrold asked before sinking his teeth into a sizeable chunk of rorx.

    
Reston described how she recently took up knitting and mangled several knots, or loops, or whatever they were, and the sweater she made looked somewhat dilapidated. At first she was very upset, but after, they both laughed hard. He helped her undo everything and rewind a few balls of yarn.

    
Reston also told stories about each of his three children and their escapades. Garrold asked about the kitchen, then about Blades practice, and wanted Reston to repeat the story of the Loth-Vale who had eaten three whole rorxes. Reston told him all, entertaining him while he ate.

    
After the rorx, rice, and greens disappeared, they broke the bread together, ate it with some cheese, and chased it with wine. They carried on for almost an hour before the earlier incident with Temmolin came up.

    
"Yeah," Garrold said, "he just smacked it right out of my hand and it went flying, ashes flew everywhere, and he called me a mung, of all things, can you believe it?"
"A mung?" Reston was appalled. "By Vikzyrn, what was he thinking? Can he do that? Can’t you do something, go to the Magna or something?"

    
"No, no, no" Garrold shook his head and waved his hand, "that’s not available. The Magna is quite fair, true enough, but he must defer to his higher functioning magnhemists when it is word against word or there would be confusion in the Bower and others would openly challenge superiors. Besides, we’re talking about no less than the Grand Holder himself, highest judge of the land. And what if The Magna is also curious to know about the dispatch? I’m sure Ulberrin means well, but I can’t risk what could come of it."

    
Reston leaned in toward Garrold and talked under his breath, "So what does the dispatch say? Should we be alarmed? Is there trouble? Are you going to Yarowglan?"

    
"Whoa, slow down there, one question at a time, friend." Reston often slung several questions at once as they popped into his head. He annoyed many with this habit, but not Garrold, it amused him. At times, he even played around with Reston by firing back four or five quick answers respective to each question.

    
"There are strange things happening to the balance of the power over in Vikzyrn. It might be connected to the possible defection of some Providers from Ghalensa. A revoked Seer, who is expert in discerning these things, has pointed them out. He says that whatever is happening is not random, but very bad, tainted, evil."

    
"Don’t surprise me none," Reston shook his head, "nothing good has ever come out of that Ancient-forsaken waste."
Garrold peered off toward the far end of the dining room, the wheels of his mind turning, gathering speed. "I don’t quite know what to do, whether to go meet with Haknem or arrange a meeting with the Seer, or undertake my own observations. It’s too early to say, I’d be springing the bell to make a decision now."

    
They both mused and sipped their wine and ate some cheese followed by a good chunk of bread, and sipped more wine.

    
"Just keep these things to yourself, my friend," Garrold requested as he began to back away from the table.

    
"Oh I certainly will, Garrold, you know that," Reston assured him, "here, take this bread and cheese for the walk home."

    
"It’s just around the corner– "

    
"I know, I know," he said, "but take it anyway, it will make me feel better."

    
"As you wish, you just stay out of Temmolin’s way and don’t let on that you ever talked to me. He’ll pry things out of you that you forgot I even said."

    
"No way, Garrold, I’m too sly for that old grouch. Why, I could even have him turned around backward in no time."     

    
Reston was fooling. They both knew damn well that as a kojen servant of the Bower, he would show the utmost respect to Temmolin. He would probably even shake in his boots just to talk to Temmolin. But he meant well and his heart was with Garrold.

    
Reston began barking several commands to his workers, some of whom appeared to be standing around without direction. Garrold took leave and made his way for the exit opposite the way he had entered. He lived within the courtyard of the Bower complex, not more than three hundred feet from the dining hall. That put eight hundred feet between him and the Bower itself, which stood a little over a hundred and twenty feet high, precisely in the center of the entire complex. The Bower, perimeter wall, and several buildings had been built by the Providers during the Settling. The rest of the buildings were added through the many circuits since then and were of various sizes, shapes, materials, and time periods.

    
Garrold loved the solitude of the Bower complex late at night. He inhaled the fresh forest air wafting in from the surrounding land. The chill in the air was invigorating. As he walked, he thought on the day, especially on the dispatch.     

    
What would he do?

    
The shadows stirred. Something loomed there. He stopped dead in his tracks, hand on the hilt of his blade. Both of the larger moons, Tor and Sar, were out. Each shone, Tor half full, Sar almost full, on nearly opposite sides of the sky. Tor headed toward its setting. Though this often made for some very interesting shadows, more than opposite moons had disturbed these.

    
"Who are you? Show yourself," he said.

    
A long, curved blade protruded from between two tightly situated buildings. The cloaked and hooded wielder crouched in the shadows. Garrold sought his orb with his left hand. With his right, he drew his blade.

    
"Come no closer," a strange voice hissed with an accent Garrold never heard before, "we mean you no harm."

    
Garrold crouched silent, straining to see, ready to use his blade.

    
"I bear a message from he who comes with the hordes. Beware of meddling where you don’t belong, Magnhem Garrold, Son of Dinnis the Helper, Elya-mate. Kurdevon is sure to die. Take heed, we prepare the paths of the Ancients who are coming to Aralon to right the wrongs of magnhemistry. You can be a powerful help and well accepted of the Ancients. They have noted your ability. Do not foolishly become an adversary, Garrold. The choice of life or death is in your hands. Don’t be stupid."

    
"Yes, it’s your choice," a gruffer voice hissed from behind him off to the other side, obscured by a protruding porch, "the Ancients come with the hordes of wrath. Go now and join Magna Ulberrin and Grand Holder Temmolin, and spare Rudivia, and be great among the Ancients."

    
"Do not move before the count of twenty," the first voice returned. Garrold barely saw movement as both figures melted back into the shadows and disappeared in the dark recesses between buildings. Garrold yelled after them, "Why can’t you show yourselves? If you’re genuine–"

    
"Take heed," a voice cut in, hissing loudly in his ear from behind. Garrold spun, blade ready. Nothing. Just the shadowy wisps of moist night air.

    
He found himself quite alone in the silent and still evening with his heart pounding and his thoughts racing. Join Temmolin? I will do no such thing. Not another shadow stirred. The night became as before. He looked for some clue of them in the shadows. There were only bushes. An owl hooted away somewhere off in the woods. The smell of burning hickory trickled up his nostrils. It was almost as if he’d imagined the whole thing.



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Tuesday, September 15, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
The Annals of Ghalensa:
Power to Remake

CHALLENGE:  How about some sci-fi and fantasy poems, or just some really surrealistic and otherworldly stuff?  Give us something fantastic and wondrous.


Prologue


     It never left a mark. But Garrold had heard the stories, the descriptions of the intense pain that caused many to buckle at the knees and drop as their shaking hands yielded up the dark and lifeless spor.

    
“If you’re rejected,” one of the older boys shared while they sat in the glow of an open fire, “you’ll think you’re dying. It’s like holding one of these embers,” he pointed, then kicked the hot bed of coals into a fountain of sparks. The heat washed over Garrold’s face.


    
Everyone stared, their ashen faces aglow.


    
“Only the pain doesn’t stop there. It saturates you head to toe, a horrible tingling and burning inside you. Not on your skin but inside your flesh, and your bones ache like you’ll never forget, like it’s sucking the life out of you. Everything goes dim as you go limp and you just fall– bap,” he clapped his hands together, “and you give it up.”


    
Garrold shook the memory from his head and looked up into the Grand Holder’s chiseled face. Grand Holder Temmolin, highest judge of the province, placed the spor into Garrold's outstretched, open right hand and declared, “The Spor of Rudivia as an extension of the Bower of Rudivia, will now declare if this jennah is called to the Art of Magnhemistry.”

    
Garrold stared in awe at the spor in his open palm. Excitement surged through every fiber of his being. His senses heightened and time stood still. The spor became the center of his universe. The moment had come. 

    
“Young jennah,” Temmolin said, “close your hand around the spor.”


    
Emotion lumped in Garrold’s throat and swirled in his stomach. It should have been easy. How could he be so sure and yet somehow unsure? Logic said, do it, close your fist, it has to be this way, but his fingers wouldn’t listen. Something held him back. A deep-seated fear. What if he didn’t make it?  


    
He couldn’t fathom not being chosen. But would he? That one defiant doubt gnawed at him, shook him, and grew into other doubts and questions. What if the spor rejected him? How badly did it really burn those it rejected? Would he scream? Would the pain of the spor come close to the pain of rejection?


    
What if magnhemistry didn’t want him? 

    
Despite the gnawing doubt, he beheld the spor with wonder. His brow furrowed as he glared at his unmoving fingers.


    
What am I doing? Why can’t I close my fist? Why is this so hard? This is utterly ridiculous. He drew a long breath.
I am a magnhemist. I have the spor in my hand. I must close my fist around it and show everyone here that I have been chosen. It’s just the way it is.


    
He snapped his hand into a tight fist. 

    
He felt nothing. No sting, no pain, nothing. No rejection. No remorse. Was this it, then? Was it that simple?


    
Elation coursed through his veins like a throbbing tickle from head to toe. He wanted to shout for joy, but he couldn’t let loose, not here, not in the middle of a solemn Occasion, and especially not in front of Temmolin. He held himself.


    
With a grave seriousness, Grand Holder Temmolin nodded and motioned as he spoke, “Open your hand, young jennah Garrold, it is my solemn duty to reccc– ” 

    
Gasps of shock swept through the gathering. The spor was dark and lifeless.


    
No. It couldn’t be. It was supposed to be abuzz and glowing with a rich green light, the color of Rudivia. The spor had not stung him.  How then could it be dark and lifeless? This had never happened before. His heart deflated as he looked into Temmolin's puzzled eyes. The moment froze around him. A thickness, like a heavy fog, closed in. The pitiful moans of friends and family brought the world down around him.


    
No. This is a lie. Hot indignation flowed through his veins. It was a treacherous moment that magnhemistry would betray him, but not this dawn. Out of his indignation came vehemence, and out of his vehemence, fury, and out of fury, a passion he’d never felt before and had not known since. That passion burnt the fog off. He cleared his mind. Something went wrong and he was going to fix it.


    
With relentless determination he focused on his palm.
I am a magnhemist. I have not been rejected. The spor has not stung me. I am different, unique, chosen for a special purpose. The spor is testing me. Yes, that’s it, a test. I will succeed.


    
He closed his fist around the spor, turned it over, and squeezed with all his might. A troubled look gripped Temmolin's face as Garrold took control of his own Occasion. The Circums, magnhemists of the outer circle, murmured, no doubt surprised at his disaffected display of self will. Who was this child to be playing with the spor? He didn’t care. He was about to show them the power of his calling. 

    
As he squeezed, a deep thrum reverberated through his body even as a clear vision evolved in his mind. He was transported to a grassy knoll of hillocks. There, atop the next hillock, sat a multicolored orb. He knew he had to get it. He raced toward it only to find that as he approached the summit it now rested atop the next hillock.


    
Several times he raced for it and each time it evaded him. He noted its actions and perceived a way to cut it off. He feinted toward it, sidestepped the hillock, and rolled into the little gully leading to the next hillock beyond. He didn’t know how he knew it would work, but he knew it would. He intercepted the orb before it could slide up the next grassy rise.


    
Colors exploded in his mind and the vision shattered into shards of brilliant white light. Folks drew back and even the Circums gasped at the phenomenon they witnessed. The light shone forth from every crack between Garrold’s fingers and out the sides of his fist, as if he were holding a tiny sun.


    
The light changed into a deep crimson, then brightened into a vibrant red, then orange, yellow, and through every other color of the prizmhata, to a deep purple. After another bright flash of white, the light became a brilliant green. Veor, the color of Rudivia.


    
He turned his fist back over, palm up, and presented a glowing green spor to the Grand Holder, brighter green than anyone ever remembered seeing it. He looked up into the Grand Holder’s penetrating silver eyes, now squinted and filled with silent fury. The lines on his ashen face became pronounced. He was clearly livid that Garrold had taken matters into his own hands. Nonetheless, Temmolin held his rage in and finished the Occasion with all the dignity he could muster.


    
“Young jennah Garrold, it is my solemn duty to recognize that you have been chosen by the spor of at Bar Veoria, in the Province of Rudivia, to the Art of Magnhemistry. Do you accept this solemn charge and the grave and immense responsibilities of service to the people of your province to which the spor has called you?”


    
Another voice sounded out, “Truly the spor has chosen you for a mighty purpose.”


    
Temmolin glared at the group of Circums, not sure where the voice came from. The Circums also stirred, looking at one another. Who had spoken?


    
“I accept,” Garrold said.


    
Temmolin snatched the spor from Garrold’s hand. It went dark even as he slipped it into the folds of his robe.


    
“The Occasion of Choosing for the young jennah, Garrold, has ended," he said, "Let it be known and published throughout the Province of Rudivia that Garrold, son of Dinnis the Helper, has been called to the Art of Magnhemistry and has accepted this solemn charge. He is allowed five dawns to set his affairs in order after which time he will report to the Bower as a Learner to study under Magnhem Grygoor, Master of Magnhemistry. It is as it is.”





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Sunday, September 13, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
It's In There

What is?

a poem

Come on, I know there is a poem you waiting to bust out.  Give it a shot. Surprise yourself. 

What happened to all the folks who used to love taking on the prompts?

DON'T FEAR THE PROMPTS


Read the prompt list below, absorb it, think on it, get inspired by it, then write a poem utilizing one or more of the prompts.
You do not have to use the prompt lines verbatim. If you just get an idea from them, go ahead and write a poem. Try to use as many lines or concepts as possible.
 
Feel free to change tense, person, number, or use any form of a word in the prompt and even delete the "small" words if needed-- just bend them, break them, anyway you need them, as long as you love them, it's okay.
Here are the prompts:

soar with words
commonality's complacent weariness
give credence to the toad
you epitomize a dirty pot
resonant spoons sing
a countenance like stellar dust
these aromatic ideas
some kind of wired trap
deplorable inadequacy
sculpting dimensional realities
lifting the inner ban
this poet's dampened dream
one stalwart tree
trails to lead where we know not
simple sojourns far and large
must be destroyed
the wail of moonlit wolves
ornate woodwork
seasonal brevity
for the love of life
stolen glimpses of yesteryear
from deep within we hide
delusion's tricky game
moments missed and gone
the dark damp walls linger
frozen words on fire
bleeding pens and retractable hearts
words left to play alone
the mirror moved before me
this vacant stare I see
the sound of the colors of your breath
a salty situation
berating bylines of idiocy
fast going nowhere now
corroded by your caustic words
axe buried deep in my psyche


Use twenty prompts and produce
a "genius" or "smarty-pants" poem.

If you use all the prompts,
that is called a "supergenius"
or "triple-smarty-pants" poem.

HAVE FUN WITH IT ALL


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Pride In Poetry Volume I


A gripping anthology featuring many of your favorite MySpace Poets as well as other online and conventional poets. 

Chosen by NavWorks Press for their clarity, readability, impact and pleasure, the 107 selected poems by 76 different poets fall into such categories as culture, life experience, world experience, philosophy, spirituality, nature, youth, abstractions, love and relationships, writing and poetry, and more. We know you will enjoy the diversity of topics, forms, styles and voices in this appealing anthology.

For a list of poets featured in the volume,
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Thursday, September 10, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Incredible~Ineffable

Thursday Open Forum

Display your work ~~ post responses.

Post as many times as you want and please leave at least two comments on other people's posts or work.
 
This forum works with your participation and
 feedback to other poets and writers,
so pour it on. 
 
Post whatever poetry you want to showcase here. 

Front yourself, put your blog links here. 

Talk about anything related to poetry.


Suggested Challenge:  Post three responses to other work in the forum today.

HAVE AT IT





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NavWorks Press

presents

Between Life and Language:
 
Pride In Poetry Volume I


A gripping anthology featuring many of your favorite MySpace Poets as well as other online and conventional poets. 

Chosen by NavWorks Press for their clarity, readability, impact and pleasure, the 107 selected poems by 76 different poets fall into such categories as culture, life experience, world experience, philosophy, spirituality, nature, youth, abstractions, love and relationships, writing and poetry, and more. We know you will enjoy the diversity of topics, forms, styles and voices in this appealing anthology.

For a list of poets featured in the volume,
CLICK HERE

Click on the book cover below to find out more about this exciting volume and for ordering information.


Wednesday, September 09, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Let Go

Poems of Release

Today's challenge is going to focus on content and theme rather than form, style, or poetic devices.

You are free to use whatever poetic devices and forms you deem appropriate, but the point of the challenge is to write a poem that expresses release

This might take the form of an expression of releasing tension, or the relief felt from escaping a dire situation, or the freedom of having broken the hold of oppression, whether in a neglect or abuse situation or in some kind of addiction you overcame.  It can also be a simple outpouring of pent up emotion, the release is itself.

In whatever way you wish to express release, being freed, or achieving great relief, just go for it.  Let it flow.

CHALLENGE: Write and/or post poems that express letting go, that express release in some form or fashion.

Let's see what you will "release" here today!


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Monday, September 07, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Poems of Change

This is a SPECIFIC TOPIC challenge.
 
This is a specific topic challenge with a twist or a "kicker."
 
Topic: change
 
Challenge: Write poetry that expresses change in some way, change in nature, change of ideas, change of stance, calling for change or desiring change.
 
Challenge Kicker: Do not use any forms of the words "change" or "transform" in your poem. You can imply them, describe them in another way, use them as a concept-- but DO NOT STATE these words in any way. 
 
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Saturday, September 05, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Some Favorite NavWorks Forms

Challenge 1: Write a topograph poem or variant.

The topograph is a form that does not rely on words or syllables, but on lines. It increases in number of lines and then decreases. On a topographic map, elevations are noted by lines. The single line is the lowest elevation and as you gradually move in toward the peak, the lines on the map get closer together or more dense.

Likewise with the topograph poem.

The first stanza is a single line, the second stanza is a couplet, the third stanza is three lines (a tercet), then the fourth is back to a couplet and the fifth stanza is again a single line. So the line pattern is 1-2-3-2-1 (remember, these are lines, not words or syllables). It will look like this:


The first line is all by itself

The next two lines will be paired
A couplet you can rhyme or not


Then the three, a tercet it's called
Again you can rhyme or not as
You see fit to make it work.


Then back to the couplet you
Just need two lines again here

And finally finish with one line

The topograph can be written any style-- short lines, long lines, rhyming, non-rhyming, metered or not. The poet has great freedom in applying his or her particular unique approach to the topographic form.

There are some interesting variations that have developed over time, the bookend topograph where you "bookend" the poem by making the single first line and the single last line the same, or nearly the same. The mirror topograph in which the poem can be read both forward or backward to the middle line in a mirror image-- that is-- it reads the same both ways. This is an intricate poem extrememly difficult to pull off.

Another variant is the extended topograph where instead of only going "up" to a tercet (three lines) for the middle stanza, you go up to a quatrain (four lines), or "super-extend" to a cinquain (five lines).
Another variation instead of extending is doubling, or tripling, making a chain topograph. Two stanzas are called a twin peak topograph, three would be a triple peak topograph, and on. To do a multiple topograph you simply write two topographs together, but the middle line is a shared single line, thus the line pattern is 1-2-3-2-1-2-3-2-1.
 
The topograph form has proven to have incredible versatility and you will amaze yourself how it builds and tapers naturally having a unique symbiotic effect on your inspired writes.

Hope you try it yourself and if you find an interest in it possibly thinking of getting the word out about it and spreading it far and wide. It would be an honor to us if you decided to share this form with all your friends and fellow poets.

The following topograph is an example of what can be done with this form. ~ ~ ~


Blossoming Love
In full bloom we had so much going

But the summer of our love wore on
and you dried up and went to seed

I took that gift and cherished it
laid you to rest in my secret garden
and waited out the icy hard winter

Spring came and so I tilled in hope
planted with my heart, watered in tears

New love opened in full glorious bloom.

©2008-2009 NavWorks Press and DE Navarro. All Rights Reserved.


Enjoy making your topographs.


Challenge 2:  Write one or more Eintou (en-too) poems. 

The Eintou (en-too) is an African-American form consisting of a single stanza or multiple stanzas of septets (seven lines each) with a syllabic or word count of 2-4-6-8-6-4-2.

When center aligned, this tends to give the poem a rounded shape which is intentional to its meaning. The word eintou comes from the West African Yoruba language, where it means pearl, and we know a pearl is rounded. The Eintou is a pearl both in the literal and figurative sense.

Literally the poem is rounded just as the beautiful and precious spherical object that results as a consequence of internal agitation of a foreign particle. And figuratively, the poem should present some "pearl of wisdom."

Anyone can borrow this form to write a poem that reflects a pearl of wisdom or insight born out of social adversity or the challenges of life.

The compact form of a single Eintou requires a brevity of expression and a controlled speech that focuses on symbolism, metaphors, and turns of speech. It endeavors to move away from imagery and narration favoring a series of central emotions and themes.

The Eintou often seeks to provoke a response out of deep thought and reflection in the reader by its use of vivid sensory and reactionary language.


Here is an example of a singular Eintou.

Eintou on Eintou

Eintou
has the bones of
syllables and line count,
but the flesh is something different;
to each their creation,
louder then, with
power.

-Britton Stockstill [(c)copyright Britton Stockstill]

 
Challenge 3:   Write a Shallimar.

A Shallimar is 4 stanzas. Each stanza consists of 4 lines, and each line consists of 4 syllables, hence it is a 4x4x4. The Shallimar can be rhymed or unrhymed.


Here is a sample:

Something Clicked

Therapeutic
Instamatic
Katie Couric
In his attic.

Jobless loser
vile mind dregs
loves the news or
loves her fine legs.

Pretty anchor
true fixation
vile rancor
aberration.

Sold out Rather
like a Walker
in a lather
newborn stalker.

©2007-2009 NavWorks Press and DE Navarro. All rights reserved.


Play with the forms
and post as many poems
as you like.

Summary:

Challenge 1: Topograph (w/variants)
Challenge 2: Eintou
Challenge 3: Shallimar


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Thursday, September 03, 2009 

Category: Writing and Poetry

POST AWAY


Thursday Open Forum

(it seemed prudent to just extend this to Thursday)


suggested challenge: find a line or poem already posted that inspires you and use it as a prompt or starter for a new poem by you



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