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stewart McKenzie


Last Updated: 5/23/2009

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Gender: Male
Status: Married
Age: 43
Sign: Cancer

Signup Date: 8/8/2006

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Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
It was just after midnight when there was a knock at the door of number 7 lower glen park
who the hell can that be at this time of night said derick
when he went to open the door 3 masked figures rushed in and over powerd him and went swiftly and very quietly through the house
they quickly bound and gagged the women and 2 of her children and took them out to a waiting van
the 3rd child they left for this was the light warrior
the 3rd chlid was so angry at the intursion and the abuduction of his family that just for an instant he could do nothing as he was temporeraly paralised with fear
one on the masked abducters then went back into the house to give the young warrior a message
you know what we want and you have 48 hours to give it to us or your family will pay with their lives
and their souls will give us all some extra years its your choice
this is your only warning
with that the masked man ran out of the house
shortly after the men had left the young lad had recoverd from the inital shock of what had happend and he swore to get his family back and to take out every one of the conclave
not just his village one but every last one of the sect
for over the last few weeks he had become aware of who and what he realy was
also he knew this time and place was where the final battle of satur was to take place
shortly after 7am that morning stewart went up to the moors above the village where he had first witnessed the ceramony and saw the demon
with a growing sence of anger he aproched the alter of sacrifice
stewart then stood on top of the alter and called a very powerfull spell out
omm see anna
domma calle comat
salla chevanna
colla n oterva ann
as he was casting the spell the air around him became heavy and alive
lightning started to flash through the sky
fire erupted on the ground around the alter
stewart then jumped off the top of the alter and began cating the spell futher and further afield buliding up the power around him
he then turned to face the alter and aimed
the spell directly at the alter
what happend next was spectacular
the alter started to glow white hot the air around it started to get very heavy and hot
suddenly the very heart of the alter exploded with such a noise you would have thought a bomb had gone off
as the alter exploded souls that had been trapped over centurys of sacrifice were set free
the light warrior then shouted out in a very angry voice
hear me satur i have destroyed one of your alters and freed your captives
be warned i am comming for you now
you have taken my family
so i shall take yours
and this time i will not only take them i will give you back to your own family in pieces so your father will know the time of your reign on this earth has ended
be also warned if any of my family have been harmed your fianl days here on earth will be painfull and i will inflict so much hurt on you that what your conclaves do to my own family will seem like ant bites
prepare your family for my vengence and retrebution for
am comming for them
Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: MySpace
freinds are people that will give you support when you are down
and at the same time are not afraid to give you a kick up the ass when your being a prat
Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: Life
does the first cup of coffee/tea of the morning taste so much better than any other one you will drink through out the day ?
Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: Life

previouse to my escapade tonite i have had 1 other prat fall many years ago not long after i came to aberdeen
my mate and i decided to go up the train line from aberdeen to some onse house a little ay out
what i should not have done was go for a few drinks before hand then get on the dam train
a few drinks did i say? ok i was blazing drunk !!!!!
where i endend up was thurso
to those of you who have no idea where thurso is you take the train going north of aberdeen and you keep going till you get to the very last station on the line
it was not until i woke nearly 4 hours later i was asked by the train gaurd if i was planning on sleeping on the train or getting off
i woke in thurso
what i have no idea is how i ended up ther as to get to thurso from aberdeen you have to change at inverness
just one of the drunken escapades i got up to in my 20s
now i was not too botherd about where i ended up as i used to live in thurso for 7 years before moving to aberdeen
now i dont have a drink on a train journey at all

Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: Life
well it had to happen sooner or later
was in town tonite waiting for my bus home as normal
saw what i thought was my number on a bus got on it and promptly went on a nice tour of the north of aberdeen
took me a dam hour to get home
20 plus years in aberdeen and always got on the right bus too and from work but not tonite
jeez sometimes my stupidity even amazes me
Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry

as i lay on my scented bed
the sweet smell of the heather is strong
i do not want to move but i must
i hear the sound of a thousand pipes and the call to rise
the drums that beat the marching feet and the call to arms
oh lass its been a long road but the bands do call
i rise to the phantom pipes
so give me a kiss and a fond fairwell
and i will see you on the other side

Sunday, September 02, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
as i walk through the glens of my country
i hear the call of the majestic eagle
her cry of freedome is so good
i hear the wind accross the glen and smell the sweet heather
oh come lassie let us take a walk into the quiet oh my beloved glen
the mountains soar up in the distance and you feel that time has stood still here for centurys
when i see your bonne face it fair lights up my world
and like the bonne hills and glens of the beloved land it makes my love for you spring eternal
Thursday, August 23, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
this is just a short story
there was once not that long ago a man who had a talent to make every one smile and laugh
now over the years he had made a lot of fok very happy with his humer and wit
but what very few folk suspected was this
he was a very sad and lonly man
he used his talent to hide his pain and insecuratie
like all good comediens he had a darker side that he could not let the world in general know about
sometimes he would be so scared of things he retreted into his fantasy world even deeper to hide how he was feeling
but one day his talent could not hide his pain and feeling of lonliness
so he did what he knew one day he had always suspected he would do when things got too much
he took a walk
he carried as always his mobile phone with him where ever he went
and as always it was switched on to keep him and other people in touch with each other
but today things would be diffrent
as he went for a walk he looked at his mobile phone and with out a further thought he turned it off compleatly
he then carried on walking to his ultimate destination
he came to a seat over looking the sea and sat down
he let his mind wander and he switched off the outside world
in his mind he rememberd all the things he had done in his life
all the people he had ever met and he even remmberd some of the conversations he and them had together
his heart was beating slowly and the heavyness he felt in his life was getting harder to bear
he somoned up his past as if it were a new book and re read it all over again he was laughing at the good times he had with his freinds and family
he cried at the bad times he rememberd in his life
he cried at getting hit by his parents as a child
he cried at all the things he had ever done wrong in his life as well
slowly as he came to the present time of his life in the book he was reading
he felt a calmness likes of which he had never felt before and he smiled
it was 3 days later that some one found his body
sitting on a bench overlooking the sea
the cause of death ?
open
but as the young man looked downon himself just before he started his new and exiting journey
he new how he had died
he died of a broken heart and the fact that like every comedien before him he could not give himself the happiness he gave others
Thursday, June 28, 2007 

 have decided not to post any more on here as no one seems to be reading my blogs  ah well never mind there are plenty of other sites that folk do read and give me hounest opinions on what i write good or bad its all constructive and helps me grow so the village will not be continued on here unless im asked for next instalment

sorry folks

Saturday, June 23, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry

are you reading my story THE VILLAGE?

do you like it? are you wondering what happens next ?

would like to hear from any one who is actuly following the story and has comments on it

this story like all my other ones is purly from ,my own imagination

though to be hounest the village i have based story on does realy exist

it is a thriving comunity in england in the heart of cornwall

so if you are reading the story as i have said above let me know what you think of it ?

stewart

Saturday, June 23, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry

Mr peters had made arangements to meet with the other conclaves that were in the county
it had not been easy but he had managed it
so later on that week mr peters held a very historic meeting
My lords and ladys he called when the conclaves had gatherd in the village hall
this meeting has been called to order
i need your help
what ?called one of the other members from another conclave
i heard there is a light warrior in this place so what is new?
these idiots are always coming around and every conclave that comes accros one despatches them in there own place
cant you handle your own one this time ?
with that the whole hall erupted with laughter
all exept the villages own conclave
for they knew how powerfull this warrior was
they also knew this was the one of legends
this warrior would take them all out

order order! shouted mr peters
i need you to understand this warrior is THE one who our founders warned us about
he is the great destroyer
we must band together and destroy him before he destroys us
for if my conclave goes down and joins satur you will all be next
rubbish called some one in the hall
he is just a boy how can he be the one that the founders spoke of ?
Mr peters then told them what had transpired in the post office and what he himself had encounterd
so another person in the hall said warriors have always had powers they take on us we take them out
no big deal
i think you are making a big deal over nothing
am i said peters?
then let me tell you something
satur is scared of this one !
that got the whole halls attention
for if the master was afraid of a mere light warrior then there must be something to what peters had just said
how powerfull is he realy the leader of one of the conclaves asked ! for now there was a rising certantity that this warrior was indeeed the one prophisised
peters told the assembley that this warrior knew the anciant spells of old and had used them to take out 2 membbers of his village conclave
the spells have not been spoken for hundreds of years and we all know what happend then dont we ?
hundreds of years in the past another light warrior had come onto the earth and had taken 20 conclaves out and had sent them all to the great pis of samadur .saturs home
and your telling us that this warrior is the same strenght as the anciant one ? asked the other leader

i think he may be tha anciant on reborn replied peters for he knows all the ancient ones powers
but this time we may have a chance of defeting him
if we do what no ther conclave members have done in history
band together and take out this one so he can never return ever !
we must find his weekness and take his strenght away from him then we can all feast on his soul at a big meeting at the tablet of satur
can you imagin what our master will give us then
the power we will gain from giving him the anciant one ?
we will be invincable and no one will be able to stand in our way
the whole assembley agreed with what peters had just said and wonderd what weekenss the warrior had
he has a family peters said lets find them and take them hostage
peters had an an idea that this young warrior would cave into the presures of having his family taken away from him and come meekly to his doom
what he had no way of knowing was as soon as the warriors family was taken hostage it would set up a chain of events that would ultimatly change the face of every village in the conclave and have consaquenses that would reach accross the whole planet
tbc

copy write stewart mckenzie 23/6/07

Thursday, June 21, 2007 

Category: Life
just been thnking about how certain things can follow you through life and have some symbolic meaning to them
my 3 abjects are
1 cats --- they have been part of my life since i was a child i have always loved these animals and have always had them around me
the ancient egiptians reverd cats as they belived they were mystical
2 dragons ---- fanasy animals with both spiritual and magical propertys
my old name on here was weyremaster
i had an efinity with dragons
my living room has 2 huge dragon wall hangings
3 swords --- have always loved storys of swords and warriors battles of old have always had a deep fasination for me
my name on here depicts my love of fantasy and true storys of old battles
i have also a running story of an immortal highlander battling old enamys in my clan
so over all the 3 items i have mentioned have been with me for as long as i remember
and are still part of my life
Sunday, June 17, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
MR peters was not the only one i would have encounters with from the conclave that week
2 days later i had an encounter with the postmaster and post mistress
i went into the post office for my mum to get her benifit
when i went in i felt the presance of evil
the old man that was the post master hit me with a ball of grey slime than stank of putrid melting skin
it had come out of his hands he was an encotor a human who thrives on human misary
i retaliated by hitting him with a ball of fire straight in the face his screams of pure pain was horrable to hear but i kept hitting him over and over again
his whole body was on fire suddenly his wife hit me with a liquid that was the consistancy of boiling blood
she jumped on me and god was she strong for her old age she had the strenght of ten men
she cried our master wants you dead and we will have you on his alter for our regenaration
satur will give us 100 more years for your life little one
i could not shake her off she was slowly choking the life out of me and she knew it
as i was starting to lose the ability to breath i knew if i did not do something fast i would end up on the sacrificial alter
i just drew the last of my strenght and imagined the old crone being torn apart by white light
thats exactly what happend
her screams alerted a nearby house hold
as i crept out of the back door of the post office i held my hands up and cried
om so shalla ka do ma so ki
the whole building suddenly burst into flames and there would be no survivors or witness to the carnage of what had gone in there
it took the fire brigade 3 hours to put the fire out the heat was that hot it melted the paving stones outside the building
mr peters got word of the post office fire and knew he had witnessed just a taste of the young warriors power
and he knew if he did not do something fast he would lose what was left of the conclave
the young warrior had to die and soon
but it would take more than mr peters on his own to kill him
it may even take more than the village conclave to take him out
there were others around and he knew how to contact them
but would they help ?
it was unknown for conclaves to render help when light warriors apeared
in fact it had never happend in the history of the entire membership
but there was always a first
and there had to be a way of making the other conclaves help or they were all done for
what peters had come to realise was this was no ordinary warrior
this one was the one that legends had spoken about this warrior was the one that would find and take out all the conclaves this young warrior was the damed one he had come to send them all to the great master
and unless the others all joined forces the warrior would send them all to eternaty
and satur would have them all in chains of eternal pain and suffering
mr peters went to make arrangments to contact the other conclaves and to take the warrior out once and for all
Sunday, June 17, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
Well 2 weeks later i was at school doing my work when i felt a dark presance enter the class
i looked up from my book and saw the headmaster had enterd the room
now something strange suddenly happend
i saw a face superimposed on to his
it was the mask of the man at the alter
now that scared the hell out of me
mr peters for that was his name suddenly saw me and his face contorted into a scowel
the air went very cold all of a sudden around me
but what happend next took him total by by shock
for as soon as his face contorted a massive heat from me hit him full on
all this happend without the other children and teacher noticing a thing
it was almost as if the two of us had stepped out of time itself
he aproched me and said so you are the young warrior ?
well little one you wont beat us we will destroy you and your family
for we have been around far longer than you can possably imagin
again he was hit by a blast of heat from me it seemed my own body was reacting to him in a way i did not understand
suddenly he reached as if to grab me
thats when my body realy reacted to him
all of a sudden i stood up and raised my hands to him and a ball of white energy came out of both hands and hit him square in the face also my voice suddenly got very deep and i said to him
all shi ka mialo satur numadi
do so cute meandi
and the light from my hands hit him hard and he was knocked flying accross the room
this was seen by the other people in the class
but not what had acctualy happend
all they saw was mr peters one minit standing by me the next he was being flung accross the room
the teacher went to him and asked if he was ok
she seemed rather puzzeld at what she had seen but did not ask too many questions
meanwhile i was giving mr peters another message in a tounge that i did not realise i spoke
i will tell you what i said to him then i will give the translation
al qota so maida do sutur
gomma de tre can de sutra
chan cam do won
kia a
no ge moko
translation
oh you follower of sutur
i have seen your face
get thee gone to the masters home and leave me alone now
mr peters stood up and looked at me with evil and fear
he wiped at his forehead with his sleave and there was blood on it
then he walked out
the teacher gave me a weird look and told every one to carry on with their work
after the class had ended the teacher asked me to stay behind as she wanted a word
stewart she said
im not sure what happed to mr peters and your self but something is going on that i cant see but i can sence
all i ask is that you be very carfull when dealing with the headmaster
he is not one to mess with
all the teachers in the school were afraid of the headmaster as he was a bit hot temperd and used to shout at all the staff
after school mr peters called me ovet to him out side the gate of the school but when i tried to go up to him he made me stay at a safe distance from him
the air went cold again and we both stepped out of time once more
he then gave me this message
you will not defeat us young warrior
for we will destroy you
if you try to take us on our master surur is powerfull and has given us many powers over the hundreds of years we have been alive
we are stronger than you can possably imagin
so leave us and you will not be harmed
other wise stay and feel our wrath and we will send your soul to eternal pain and damnation
now you think i would have been scared shit less from all this but for some reason i wasnt
infact i saw him as an insect that was buzzing around my head and was more of an anoyance than a threat
i then gave him a message that would set the tone of the future
i have no intentions of leaving this village desciple of sutur
in fact i intend to destroy your whole conclave
do your worst and we shall see whos soul goes into eternal torment
once i have destroyed you and your conclave i intend to go after your master himself
with that time returned to normal and every one was back to normal again
i gave mr peters a final wave and went home
next chapter i encounter more of the conclave and more battles
Friday, June 15, 2007 

Category: Writing and Poetry
One day as i went up onto the moors just above the village i saw a weird sight
there in the place where the old tin mine ruins were
was a group of villagers standing in a circle
i crept forward to get a closer look as i did not want any one to see me
as i was hiding behind the gorse bushes i heard chanting comming from the people in the circle
now the time of day was not dark as you would expect .it was mid afternoon and the month was july
the people were in weird costumes depicting animals and they were all wearing masks of animals
foxes, rabbits,sheep,and there was even an owl
right in the middle of the circle was a tall man in a flowing robe with a goats mask on
the face was pure black and had long horns on his head
in the middle of the circle was an alter and on the alter was a shape of some kind it looked like a person but i could not be sure at the time
i crept a bit closer to hear what the chanting was and to see if i could make out what was going on
the words slowly came to me and as far as i can remember them this is what they were
oh shalla ka
oh shalla ka
my master calls
we welcome him
oh shalla ka
we give him this sacrifice of pure meat
oh shalla ka
our master calls for food
we welcome him
master come to take what is rightfuly yours
oh shalla ka
now at this point the air got very heavy
and suddenly the fire that was also in the middle of the circle got brighter and hotter
suddenly the man in the center of the circle and standing behind the alter shouted
he comes to claim his meal
so that we may live another year
master take what is rightfully yours and let us rejoice in another year
oh shalla ka
what happend next i could not believe my eyes
a being as big as a house stepped out if the fire and picked up the thing on the alter and i suddenly reconised that it was a teenage girl that was at my school
i could not move or screem as the entity from the fire closed its hands over the girl
she must have been in some sort of drugged state until then for as soon as the being closed its hands over her body she let out a piercing screem
that was the last thing she ever did
her body was suddenly engulfed in flames
the entity put her lifeless body into its mouth and swallowed her whole
then it turned its attention to the circle
and then it spoke
its voice was like a rock being slowly crushed by a heavy weight of mettal
oh children of satur
i have reicived your gift and welcome your devotion to me
as you have been my followers for these hundreds of years i give you another year of life
but i have a message for you
this may be the last year of your pittiful lives
as some one has enterd the village and will set out to destroy you
he is powerfull but young yet
be wary of him
he does not know his own powers yet but soon he will know what he is
be prepared to defend your selfs with all i the powers i have bestowed apon you
for you will know what it is like after so many decades to fight again
if you can get to him and influence this your warrior of the light he may be turned
but if not then your lives will surly be taken and as has been fortold your true beings will be mine at last
with that the entity went back into the fire and disapeard
well i was scared stiff and i admit i had soiled my self but i managed to get away from the moor with out being seen and i got home and changed into new trowsers
then i went out side to ponder what i had seen
i also wonderd who the being ment by the warrior of the light
what i did not realise at the time was it ment me
soon i would enter a world which would enjulf me in magic spiritual and demonic battles
as old as time itself and i would know fear beond my worst knightmares
i would also find out what i was and who i realy was